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FIC: In Between

Nov 24, 2006 22:44

Title: In Between
Fandom: Doctor Who (2005 series)
Pairings: Ensemble. Canon pairing of alt!Pete and Jackie; also mentions of Mickey/Jake. Rose/Doctor (Ten).
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own nothing you might recognize.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Summary: "Doctor," Jack tried again. "What is this, 'My Littlest Companion'?"
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doctor/rose, doctor who, fic

Comments 16

regala_electra November 24 2006, 23:29:21 UTC

Damn. That was perfect. You know, I love the way you write kids, sometimes the voices of children don't read as well in fic, but you nailed it, honestly.

*hugs*

krabapple November 27 2006, 04:00:50 UTC

Aw, thank you! A hundred times, thank you!

And thank you so much for the kid compliment. Kids are hard to write, and this one was especially hard, since on the one hand he's, well, The Littlest Time Lord, and on the other hand, he's *eight*. So, yes, thank you!

And *hugs* to you, too! *smooshes you* I miss you, doll.

amberlynne November 25 2006, 01:51:50 UTC

"I like Neapolitan ice cream, myself," Jack said.

"You would," the Doctor answered. He grinned.

*snort* If that's not the best Jack joke ever, I don't know what is!

Oh, that was just perfect!! John is such an adorable mix of The Doctor and Rose. *sniffle* That's the way it all should end. Really it is. Thank you so much for writing this!!

krabapple November 27 2006, 04:02:04 UTC

Hee! I love that line about Jack, myself. Aw, Jack, we love you. :)

I'm so, so glad you liked the fic! If only it did end like that . . . stupid showrunners!

But thanks! :)

hebrew_hernia November 25 2006, 05:51:14 UTC

Yaaaaaaaaay! I love this! I love you!

krabapple November 27 2006, 04:02:31 UTC

Awwww, thank you!!! *hugs*

thistlerose November 25 2006, 21:17:04 UTC

SQUEEE!!!

I knew the story couldn't end without him saying it, but ooooooh, when he did it made my heart all fluttery. And Mickey and Jake! I love this so much!

krabapple November 27 2006, 04:04:17 UTC

Hee! THANK YOU!!

You know, he almost didn't say it. Not because I didn't want him to, but because I was all, when is he going to have the opportunity? But then, I realilzed I just had to make one for him. *g*

Aw, Mickey and Jake. Mickey deserves someone who appreciates him, as much as he and Rose love each other as friends. :)

Thank you!

entropical87 November 25 2006, 22:05:18 UTC

Must repress urge to keyboard mash. This was wonderful, dear. Your fic always gives me a happy. :)

krabapple November 27 2006, 04:05:14 UTC

Aw, thanks!!

(And I'll accept keyboard mashes any day. :))