Episode 007: From Pikachu, With Love

Jan 16, 2011 16:30


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15 minute challenge submissions anonymous January 17 2011, 01:15:52 UTC
post your challenges here! :)

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Re: 15 minute challenge submissions anonymous January 17 2011, 01:17:49 UTC
kind of depressing. i don't know if the facts are quite right.

bom isn't present while it happens. but while it happens, she remembers eating an eggplant steak. she will always associate the taste of eggplant with death.

her mother calls her later that day.

"your aunt's burial is over. we sent her off. she's...in peace now."

bom hangs up without a word. she's scheduled for an appointment with a dermatologist, she pastes a smile onto her face and manages to semi-focus when the doctor explains procedures. when she arrives home, she locks herself in the bathroom.

"i'm taking an extra long bath" she announces.

she turns on the water, extra hot. and when the tub fills, she submerges and cries until she runs out of breath.

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the fateful day in may is bom's new beginning. she fingers her long hair and prays inwardly.

"auntie, are you looking down on me?" she wonders.

the stage isn't her best. she's disappointed. but there's an exhilaration inside of her that she can't describe. she's finally here. on stage. singing ( ... )

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Re: 15 minute challenge submissions anonymous January 17 2011, 01:24:50 UTC
oh, i really like this, anon, it's pretty!

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Re: 15 minute challenge submissions anonymous January 17 2011, 01:25:29 UTC
/tips hat.

thank you :)

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Re: 15 minute challenge submissions anonymous January 17 2011, 01:28:15 UTC
omg anon ♥ i wish more people would write member-centric 2ne1 fic, there are so many interesting things to explore about each of them

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beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:19:31 UTC
it's been decades since the city was buried ( ... )

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:22:37 UTC
oh, reads like the start to something interesting ;)

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:28:27 UTC
maybe it will turn into something interesting, eventually. :D

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:27:31 UTC
oh, this is interesting. more please!

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:31:04 UTC
i shall attempt to continue it, anon. :D

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:30:08 UTC
this is so interesting, anon. some of the description reads a little cliche to me but i want to know what's going on here. :)

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:33:17 UTC
which parts, if you don't mind me asking? /totally open to concrit

idek what's going on myself, lol, i would probably have to finish it to figure that out.

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:46:16 UTC
like stars in the night sky and sweet, sweet honey. and it doesn't seem to matter seems like a very empty/confusing statement in this case, because if i woke up chained it would definitely matter to me? but it's still very interesting and i think you should keep going~

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 01:53:33 UTC
i definitely agree with the first two - i wasn't happy with 'stars in the night sky' either, ngl, but i couldn't think of anything else to write instead since they're not actually stars. /makes no sense

it's supposed to be a confusing statement, though, cos there's a reason why it doesn't matter, but yeah, it definitely seems pretty empty when there's nothing following it.

thank you for the input! i don't get any crit often, so i jump on the opportunity on the meme. :D

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 02:07:17 UTC
echo bazaar fic?

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Re: beast, hyunseung-centric anonymous January 17 2011, 02:10:18 UTC
haha, yes. i've been vaguely obsessed with it lately. ;~;

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