SCREAM okay I can see the Mr. and Mrs. smith allusion and all in all a job well done! I liked your wording, and even though it wasn't necessarily an unexpected ending, the fic led very naturally throughout the timeline~
the only thing might be that at times it was hard to tell which perspective we were getting the story from? like I realize that it wasn't first-person and wasn't necessarily confined to one perspective, it was just a little disorienting u_______u otherwise though gj!
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the only thing might be that at times it was hard to tell which perspective we were getting the story from? like I realize that it wasn't first-person and wasn't necessarily confined to one perspective, it was just a little disorienting u_______u otherwise though gj!
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