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Round 07: I Wanna Feel (Like I Am Floating)

Apr 30, 2013 15:32

Title: I Wanna Feel (Like I Am Floating)
Team: Canon
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: SNSD
Pairing: Seohyun/Jessica
Summary: Seohyun doesn't need anyone. But maybe she does.
Prompt Used: miss A - I Don't Need A Man

( Seohyun looked up from her book to find one of the boys from her class standing in front of her desk, fidgeting with the edge of his uniform shirt. )

!fic post, cycle: 2013, fandom: snsd, team canon, 2013 round 7: i dont need a man

Comments 2

almostkiwi May 5 2013, 07:55:54 UTC

I quite liked how you wrote this and wrote their relationship ;; It's so sweet to see Seohyun's feelings slowly unfurl -- as much as she tries to deny them -- and then to try to reject them completely, and finally learning to open her heart to Jessica kalsjfklsjfsdg Seohyun's rationality and her habit of always putting others before herself is kind of heartbreaking here, but then she learns to be selfish and follows her feelings for Jessica! laksndlkfsjg I just found that really really sweet :')

biases June 9 2013, 09:41:39 UTC

this was such a good fic! I really liked your exploration of Seohyun and her feelings for Jessica and everything read believably to me. having the flashback at the beginning set the tone nicely for the rest of the story and I particularly enjoyed Hyoyeon's comments throughout the fic.

thank you for writing!