Comments | kpop_ficmix: #25 [Shinee, Jonghyun/Onew]

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#25 [Shinee, Jonghyun/Onew]

Sep 29, 2014 15:52

Fandom: SHINee
Title: white nights
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun-centric, Jonghyun/Onew
Length: 1071
Summary: Jonghyun and Jinki get stuck in the snow. But where are they, really?
Notes: i'm sorry if this doesn't make much sense, but i enjoyed writing it! xx

Remixee author: reddaylight
Title of work you remixed: Snowblind
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fandom: shinee, # 2014, rating: pg-13

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reddaylight October 3 2014, 14:20:06 UTC

OMO. Author-nim thank you so much for this story!! When I wrote that fic years ago I had vague ideas about what was happening in Jonghyun's head but I hadn't been able to flesh them out, so reading your take on the fic was refreshing. I also like how the background events (which are actually very important) are only hinted at, I'm very much a fan of stories where not everything is spelled out.

Also, a few choice lines that I liked from your fic:

he could have sworn it was nighttime. he was so looking forward to the stars.

I like this because it gave me a good frame of reference of where Jonghyun's coming from, how his mind is set. Jonghyun being wistful tells us so many hints about the events that could have led up to this.

jonghyun would love to know some of those secrets, wouldn’t mind carrying some of the weight himself, but he doesn’t think he’s even capable of asking. do leaders like to share?I'm not sure about other leaders but Onew's always been a category of his own tbh. Way back when this was written, each of the members ( ... )