#49 [B1A4, Gongchan/Jinyoung]
Fandom: B1A4
Title: Aisle Nine
Rating: PG
Pairing(s)/Focus: Gongchan/Jinyoung
Length: 1,323 words
Summary: Gongchan works at a grocery store, and Jinyoung comes to shop.
Warnings: Age gap, light teacher/student relationship (Jinyoung is not Gongchan’s teacher, but he is a teacher and Gongchan is a student).
Remixee author: the-resolver
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Title: Aisle Nine
Rating: PG
Pairing(s)/Focus: Gongchan/Jinyoung
Length: 1,323 words
Summary: Gongchan works at a grocery store, and Jinyoung comes to shop.
Warnings: Age gap, light teacher/student relationship (Jinyoung is not Gongchan’s teacher, but he is a teacher and Gongchan is a student).
Remixee author: the-resolver
Title of work you ( Read more... )
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Oh my gosh I love love love love love love love this. It's so cute and fluffy and perfect and oh my gosh so very cute.
I love how Gongchan is written over analysing everything and thinking so much about it all. It's so cute.
I love the ending scene so so so much.
"Jinyoung shoots him a quick text when he’s finished--Hi! It’s Jinyoung :), and then Gongchan makes to get out of the car, but Jinyoung grabs his wrist instead. He leans across the space between the seats and kisses Gongchan at the edge of his mouth, lips soft and warm across his skin. It barely lasts a second, but the heat of it sears into his skin, with him as he walks up the walkway to his house, smile plastered across his face."
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the image is just so incredibly cute and I love how you wrote them as characters.
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it's been forever since i wrote b1a4 so i was super nervous this wouldn't come out well ;; but i'm so happy (and relieved) that you liked it! i loved the dynamics in the original (and i felt kinda bad cutting shinwoo out, but, alas....) and i hope i did them even a little bit of justice.
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