#9 [Super Junior, Han Geng/Yehsung]

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Fandom: Super Junior
Title: Where the Heart Is
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s)/Focus: Han Geng/Yehsung
Length: 3,033 words
Summary: It's been years since he left China, and Han Geng misses home more than anything. But when he meets Yehsung, he learns that maybe, China doesn't have to be home anymore.
Warnings: bullying, mentions of violence
Notes: I've

Comments

[taylormercury]

Oh, my goodness, I'm really struggling for what to say! I was incredibly worried about whoever got me, because almost all of my fic is so old and embarrassing, and I never expected this one to be remixed! I really like what you've done with this, though! (And I think you told this story so much better than I did!)

I really like seeing this from Hangeng's POV, getting to see his thoughts, his feelings, and learn about his own life. The contrast between Yehsung's POV (angry, harsh, blunt) and Hangeng's here (gentle, soft, strong) is so apparent in the writing, in his actions, as the fic progresses. I really like how the atmosphere of yours is different, is fitting.

There are things in here that really, really hurt my heart, but I like how you use them to draw attention to the differences between Yehsung and Hangeng. Like these two lines:
it wouldn’t hurt to try to be that friend, to make the effort that no one’s made for Han Geng before.
and
for Yehsung he thinks it might be because he doesn’t care about anyone else here; for Han

[dontlookforme]

thank you so much, oh my gosh ;; i've actually always really enjoyed your writing, so it was a lot of fun to take some time and go through your masterlist (i ended up getting very sidetracked by that mutants!au you did, haha) and i have to say, i'm really honored to have been able to remix your work!!

i'm really glad this came through the way it did to you! that's really what i was trying to get across throughout the whole fic, so i'm relieved you liked it ♥

hehe in my mind, they do n__n they stick together and travel the world, and they're... happy ;; haha.

this such a lovely comment, really!! i don't even know what to say - all of this really means a lot to me, so thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the opportunity to remix your fic ;A; it's been a blast!