#9. EXO [suho/kyungsoo]

[almostkiwi]

Fandom: exo
Title: we are nowhere and it's now.
Rating: pg-15
Pairing(s)/Focus: suho/kyungsoo
Length: 2806 w.
Summary: kyungsoo likes routine and suho likes breaking it.
Warnings: none.
Notes: i had a fun time writing this, although i've never tried out this pairing & au before. i hope i did the original fic justice though! :3 special thanks to

Comments

[its_rayning]

this is gorgeous! i love the way you interchanged between the lines of the fic you remixed, and how you made kyungsoo older. and! i love the addition of tao; that was just precious:

“I mean, Kris is hot, I’m hot, no turn that way it’s a shortcut we make out a lot, and that’s pretty damn hot so it works wait it’s on the other street hold on let me check the map but you and this Suho person crap we’re on the wrong side we need to turn back are just cute, if not impossible. Even if he comes back how are you going to fix things I mean yeah here we go, it’s the house with the flamingos you don’t know his age or anything about him and that’s just not going to work out.” i love this ;o; i love how he's telling kyungsoo about his own relationship and calling directions and kyungsoo & suho's relationship, all at the same time.

really lovely :)

[galmaegi]

uwaaaa, where to begin?

first of all, i know i don't have much exo to work with, but i'm glad you picked this one! even if it's a pairing you haven't written before, you wrote it so sweetly.

i love how you've updated the au - the original was pretty much straight-up doctor who, but i love the little things you've added in to make it your own. it makes me just as curious as kyungsoo about this suho, what he does, where he goes, who he is. the little snippets about time travel and physics were a nice touch. (chanyeol ;A;)

and the writing! i love the way you write everybody: suho's pretty laugh, kyungsoo reacting to life the way he reacts to video games, and of course tao's amazing two-things-at-once monologue. this line was the one that killed me though:
A small crack appears, but it’s the wrong kind of crack, too small to be of any importance, too unimportant to be fixed.

and the ending was so nice, kyungsoo remembering what he was thinking about when they first met ;~~~~;

thank you so much for writing this ♥

[halcyondusk]

i don’t really know doctor who but this was great ;u; ahhhhh the opening section with the repetition of there is a crack on the wall, and bam--there is a person sitting in his bed. love the structure.

SUHO AND HIS TELEPHONE BOX explaining to kyungsoo the universe is going to die lmao oh this is brilliant. although i am having a bit of a difficult time imagining suho with red hair and green eyes haha. ooh you kept the lines of the original! :’)

oh kyungsoo, your homework. your kimchi spaghetti. idk why but i really liked this line: The kimchi spaghetti is prepared and Kyungsoo waits. LOL ;__; and There are no cracks on the wall but Kyungsoo would really like to crack Zitao’s head. bahahaha :’)

oh god why is zitao like this. flamingoes. i give up with you ™.

aww the interspersing sections of kyungsoo’s essay with kyungsoo and suho reuniting :’) cutest neatest ending i really enjoyed this!