#5. SNSD/Super Junior [Sunny/Sungmin]

[almostkiwi]

Fandom: SNSD/Super Junior
Title: Princess, Charming
Rating: G
Pairing(s)/Focus: Sunny/Sungmin
Length: 1,929
Summary: She reads in between the lines of her own life and makes her own fairy tale.
Warnings: none

Remixee author: domofo
Title of work you remixed: Slowly Falling
Link to work you remixed: Read more... )

Comments

[halcyondusk]

so! don’t normally read suju or snsd but i liked this :’)

firstly, the idea of dreams. the childhood innocence of dreaming big, contrasted with growing up and having these dreams falling ;___;

sunkyu and her insecurities, not being the best at anything, and realising her self-worth.

i really like the section when sunkyu’s pondering, after the drinking party. it’s very stream-of-consciousness and ack, the introduction of ‘sunny’--someone she should be, but isn’t, because sunny’s temporary. sunkyu and sungmin as normal people. sunkyu feeling worthless. yikes ;____;

i just. felt for sunkyu the whole way through ~_____~ sungmin’s smile, not directed at her. ow. but aww the ending :’) DREAMING IS FOR EVERYONE! YES!

haha i don’t make much sense sorry, but i liked this ♥

[static_abyss]

I absolutely loved this. not only do i love Sunny and Sungmin together in any way shape or form, but the way you wrote this made it achy in such a good way. Awesome fic!

[kingdra]

U G H THIS WAS WONDERFUL AND I READ THIS EARLIER THIS WEEK AND HAVEN'T HAD TIME TO COMMENT ON IT PROPERLY YET I'M SORRY (THERE'S JUST A LOT I WANT TO SAY REALLY ;_;)
SO I WILL GET TO THAT THIS WEEKEND I PROMISE ♥

[kingdra]

So first of all, I just love how you played against my 'story telling' thing in the original fic - that right away you acknowledge that love stories aren't real life but they can become real life because that's the theme of this fic and all but just - ugh, it's wonderful, I love the tone you have in this ♥

This was also a personal story so I'm really glad you remixed it and saw it from a different, and more mature perspective. The situations are different and more vague and really seem like entirely different things are happening from Sunny's POV, which is amazing that you've done this. And all the little phrases and words that are so universal, so true that you've managed to thread in this story - I would quote some to you, but it would be a lot and I wouldn't be able to pick a favorite because they're all so wonderful.

Okay, okay, no, I have to quote this to you: Why shouldn’t she summon up Sunny’s bravery and try to traverse the uncharted sky? UGH, loved the way you portrayed Sunny. I always felt like I didn't show enough of her

[mekimigure]

Oh my god you praise me so much.

It means a lot to me that you appreciate this remix. I wasn't very certain with where I was going considering that I wasn't that familiar with Sungmin. Sunny was less of a challenge to be fair. I really enjoyed myself, working off Slowly Falling which had the storytelling narrative throughout. I love going against the grain when it comes to classic sayings and what not so the fact that I had fairy tale references to pick apart made me very happy.

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying - I am honored to have made such an impression on you merely by writing this :)