My Last Train: Chapter 16

[koyashige90]

Title: My Last Train

Fandom: Kanjani8, NewS
Pairings: Nishikido Ryo x Uchi Hiroki, Nishikido Ryo x Ohkura Tadayoshi
Rating: NC-17

And NO I don't own anything except from the plot, not even the title is mine!

Summary: Ryo struggles with what his and Uchi's relationship has turned into. He needs a brake to think. He still loves Uchi but he ends up

Comments

[mikuromi]

aaaaaaaaa!! I've done mourn this time! Ohkura as it happened that crazy idea, knowing it would harm both! hurt the part where he says he did not want!

waaaaaaaaaaa!!

I look forward to the next chapter

TT_TT

[koyashige90]

I know... I'm so evil, writing things like this. :'(

As always thanks for supporting me! :)~<3

[tellytelly]

am i first??
YAY update!
love it, and it's getting heartbreaking

i still stand for Ryokura
don't know how it goes ><

pls update soon!

[koyashige90]

Yes, it is slowly breaking my heart to write this. :( But I will finish what I've started, and I will try to be faster with my update this time.

Thank you for reading! <3

[scherwood]

Love it~! <3

I want two chapters! *pout* *glomp*

[koyashige90]

You're the only one that want two endings so far, so I don't know how I will do. But thank you very much for your comment! <3 I'm glad you loved it! :D

[ohryouchipi]

as much as i want ryo only for hiroki, but i know it will not fair for ohkura and ryo so i think i prefer you only made one ending the original one, whatever the result. but wish it'll happy ending. although maybe i'll dont realy like it if isnt ryouchi but well, as long as the story is make a sense so it's okey.
ganbare ne!!!!

[koyashige90]

Okay, thank you for telling me your honest opinion. ^w^ I still haven't decided what to do, but I think I'll have to dissapoint you with a happy ending, no matter who he choose I don't think it can end completely happy. T_T

Thank you for reading and commenting! ^3^~<3

[haruka_mu]

It's not wise to be generous in love, Ohkura, be more selfish (at least for this fan of yours' sake >.<). Well, but I know I just can't blame you at all, being an idiot as you are, I can totally understand why you decide to do so. Just hope that what happens next will not be sth regrettable *look at the nice author with pleading puppy eyes*.
It will be great if the story has an happy ending (for my Ryokura ^ ^), but don't worry about the ending so much dear, just let the story flow on itself. You have done a very good job, so I guess the readers will not scold you just because the ending doesn't please them^ ^.

[koyashige90]

Ohkura really is an idiot, he should be a little more selfish... :(

I love you for leaving me such a heart filled and long comment! *hugs* I think my brain will probably just do whatever it wants, and I hope that you'll all like my ending, however it may end. Someone will have to be hurt in the end, there is no avoiding it. But I will do my best to make the ending satisfying for all my readers! Thank you so much for supporting me this far and giving me comments to feed on! ^w^

[haruka_mu]

You're always welcome, dear ^ ^
By the way, comment is the only way I can do to support this great fanfic of my OTP. You know, it's really hard to find a multi-chap fanfic of Ryokura >.<, so I really appreciate this ^ ^.
And just do what your mind tells you, I'll support you, no matter how the ending would be (just don't be ~too~ miserable ^ ^ k?).

[koyashige90]

Thenk you! <3

I know, it makes me so sad that so few wants to write RyOhkura! T-T

The next chapter is up, but I'm afraid it's pretty sad. :'(