Ha. I just like the image of Dan trying to give him medicine. Can't see that going well. 'Brat' is one way to phrase it.
Mrrrl. Thank you. I also like the image of Dan, knowing what Walter looks like, having terrible, inappropriate thoughts at absurd moments. Gymnast!Walter needs to be done more, heh.
./////. rrrrgh, oh do stop it. I love Poor Hand verse. And let me say, they may be standard in fic, but Poor Hand pulls it off in a way that is fluid and beautiful and believable. I kind of want to do a longer fic of something post-yours, but I don't like the idea of mucking it up.
Engineer Dan needs more love. His gadget-love gets set by to the side all too often for my tastes.
rrl. Well, after I finish the longer two stories I'm working on (and stop being distracted by Kinkmeme prompts) I'll try my hand at some serious Poor Hand something.
“Yup. I just fought you for half an hour to make you swallow poison.” He paws at his face, smearing cough syrup off his cheek. “Because you’re not sick from wandering the streets in nothing warmer than a soaking wet coat, and I am an evil, evil person who likes watching you suffer, which is why I forced you to take the guest bed in the first place. So I have a prime view.”
YES. yes, exactly. Dan needs to call him on his bullshit more often, I am a firm believer in this idea.
U hurts as much as I expected it to, X is a beautiful snapshot of the tension in the moments before the storm breaks, which is one of my favorite things to read/write with these two because as Dan observes here, it could go either way or really, any of a multitude of ways. And Z is an absolutely beautiful place to wrap it up.
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Mrrrl. Thank you. I also like the image of Dan, knowing what Walter looks like, having terrible, inappropriate thoughts at absurd moments. Gymnast!Walter needs to be done more, heh.
./////. rrrrgh, oh do stop it. I love Poor Hand verse. And let me say, they may be standard in fic, but Poor Hand pulls it off in a way that is fluid and beautiful and believable. I kind of want to do a longer fic of something post-yours, but I don't like the idea of mucking it up.
Engineer Dan needs more love. His gadget-love gets set by to the side all too often for my tastes.
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YES. yes, exactly. Dan needs to call him on his bullshit more often, I am a firm believer in this idea.
U hurts as much as I expected it to, X is a beautiful snapshot of the tension in the moments before the storm breaks, which is one of my favorite things to read/write with these two because as Dan observes here, it could go either way or really, any of a multitude of ways. And Z is an absolutely beautiful place to wrap it up.
These were all so, so nice. <3
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked these.
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