Comments | koutenki: the lost year (5/?)

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the lost year (5/?)

Mar 02, 2016 09:58

the lost year (5/?)
~6550, pg-13, (krystal-centric + jessica, kai, sulli, t.o.p)
part i. ii. iii. iv.
you can’t rationalize loving someone this much - much less someone who doesn’t love you as you are.

( She doesn’t want to be like her sister, not anymore. )

Ξ : douc, ♥ : krystal/sulli, ♥ : krystal/top, fandom: exo-k, ♥ : krystal/jessica, ♥ : krystal/kai, fandom: f(x)

Comments 14

douc March 1 2016, 22:59:38 UTC

spot for silentlybelieve

silentlybelieve March 2 2016, 02:54:07 UTC

Oh wow this was a chapter. This was a very moving chapter in the sense that the Jungsis portion actually had me nearly in tears. Maybe it just hits closer to home because I have a sister and our age difference is only a year off from Jungsis'. Although it makes me question why Sooyeon is so against the idea of Seunghyun, I assume it's just because she's concerned for her sister. But yes, I love all the raw details of her being kicked out and how Soojung is basically like what the hell were you expecting. Ah yes those things that can only be said within fic. I love it ( ... )

douc March 7 2016, 06:02:23 UTC

Again, I don't have any siblings so instead, I modelled this argument after my own relationship with my cousin (similar age gap) cause she's like a sister to me. I wasn't sure if this would translate well but once I finished it, I was pleased with it! I'm glad that this really resonates with you bb. Ooh, I think one thing I didn't consider when writing this fic is personal info/background of some characters...? Obvly we know Jungsis since we're stans but unless you stan TOP, you wouldn't know that he's got commitment issues and he (allegedly) has a bad track record with previous relationships. Since Jessica is close with some members of Big Bang, I just wrote it as her having the foreknowledge of this issue. YES LOL those things that can only be said in fics ( ... )

douc March 1 2016, 22:59:47 UTC

spot for cleonsyk

cleonsyk March 2 2016, 00:59:32 UTC

“When is it going to stop hurting?”

“When you give up trying.”

If I haven't said it before, I'll say it again I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS

I love how Top is so caring and careful with Krys, like she's delicate little flower which she is. And I love the dynamics of JungLi's relationship which was ofc perfectly written in this chapter. And Jungsis :((((

i don't know what else to feel help me :(((((((

douc March 2 2016, 02:34:10 UTC

you forgot the part where I wrecked my heart kaistal

but omfg it killed me to write jungsis like that tho /screams/

cleonsyk March 2 2016, 05:01:12 UTC

angst circle a.k.a. half of the members are kaistal trash

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douc March 1 2016, 23:00:29 UTC

spot for kurdoodle

kurdoodle March 17 2016, 06:11:00 UTC

omg it's been so long sorry i'm just commenting now ( ... )

douc March 1 2016, 23:01:03 UTC

spot for xkayye

xkayye March 8 2016, 14:05:18 UTC

Okay this is like an irrelevant bit of a comment but TOP making krys lunch made me want to eat that sandwhich (how dare you describe good food when i am hungry lols).

THIS WAS JUST TOO MUCH ANGST. URGH. I MISS SULLI PROBABLY AS MUCH AS KRYS MISSES HER HERE BUT OMG THEY'RE BOTH ON THE FLOOR AND IT'S JUST TOO SAD. SO BROKEN.

JUNGSIS WAS COMPLETELY SAVAGE IT'S BREAKING MY HEART REALLY BUT THAT SCENE WITH BELOVED PAPA JUNG MADE ME TEAR UP. That was really heartfelt and it really needed that bit in this chap ;~;

I can't help but say that I really really admire how you wrote this whole story so far, like how can you??? The plot, the characters and their personality that makes it feel so real, and like every scene that just flows into one another, THE STORY ITSELF????
AAAH, LIKE I SAID BEFORE, THIS IS THE KRYSTAL-CENTRIC FIC THAT'LL STAY IN MY HEART.

nicxsehun March 6 2016, 15:20:47 UTC

“When is it going to stop hurting?”

“When you give up trying.”

thaioshfibdsjfbsjhsaf this messed me up this whole story has messed me up so bad i can't it's so sad but aaaah this chapter was amazing as always

that bit where she and taemin just hug it out is absolutely adorable i want to be hugged like that pls

and i really loved that bit with her father T_T

i never actually thought of top and krystal together/shipped them before reading this story but this has changed my mind????? ofc i know this isn't real but it feels like it is ????? jahfbjsdkfljdshf it's so raw and real

i love how their relationship is making krystal (or both her and top) feel free, in a sense, not needing to pretend they are who they aren't but ironically, jessica is warning her that he's going to smother her eventually and idk if i'm just reading too much into things or idk idk idka sjnfdbagsv goodbye

douc March 7 2016, 05:53:16 UTC

so Kaistal will always be the OTP but I can really see TOP and Krystal as a couple irl...? Idk they're both my bias and when the rumours circulated, my first thought was 'wtf?' but after I thought about it for a bit, I realised they're both really similar ppl. I think she'd be good for him, not sure if he'd be too good for her with all his commitment issues tho /shot/

omfg writing that father bit was difficult! I couldn't imagine it but I really tried so I'm glad you like it bb. I want to be hugged like that too, especially if it's Taemin hehe

ASDFGSH I'm so happy to hear you enjoy this chapter because I worked real hard at writing this /hugs/