The Lost Year (2/?)

Jan 17, 2016 21:34

the lost year (2/?)
~5200, pg-13, (krystal-centric + jessica, kai, sulli, t.o.p)
part i.
People have more than one great loves in their life (so she was told), the problem is he is the first of those for her.

It’s easier to act like she still has something left to call home. )

Ξ : douc, ♥ : krystal/sulli, ♥ : krystal/top, fandom: exo-k, ♥ : krystal/jessica, ♥ : krystal/kai, fandom: f(x)

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douc January 17 2016, 10:37:08 UTC
spot for cleonsyk (cus kaistal angst cries)

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cleonsyk January 17 2016, 13:33:28 UTC
THE HONOR OF HAVING THE FIRST SPOT ASLGKJDSLFKSJFA

*clears throat*

I actually love it when two random strangers have more than one run-ins. Like, could it be fate, could it be destiny, or are we fooling ourselves with the idea that we may have found a possible great love/soulmate? I love how she's seen him at the museum, the place where she can be an art dork and he just patiently listens, trying to read her.

I love how you've written jungsis in this. Considering how sensitive Sica's leaving is, I'm glad you covered it with Krys always always supporting her back, against anyone who deems her sister a traitor. Them trying to recover from blows of the past by escaping to New York for awhile was beautifully delivered.

That Sestal at the end (with a hint of a possible Jongin from behind acknowledging her presence) wrapped this chapter smoothly. Lovely lovely work, Yuri. Can't wait to see your next update! :)

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douc January 30 2016, 11:38:01 UTC
LATE but how can I not reply to such a long, nice comment? <333

YES I feel like it could be done to the point where it's just boring cliche (I hope that's not the case here) but I really do enjoy reading about a random run-ins between 2 complete randoms. Like you have explained so eloquently, it's a fascinating ideology about faith and such. Ya, cause Soojung is such an art hoe and we love her for it lol

With Jungsis, their getaway HAD to be NYC. The Jungsis onstyle show was filmed there, so obviously it had to be revisited for a getaway. Yeah, I think we can all agree that it must have been really on Soojung when Jessica left/was forced out of SNSD.

Everyone love Sestal, period. That's the conclusion I have reached upon reading the comments I got for the fic lol. (Part 3 is up!)

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douc January 17 2016, 10:37:39 UTC
spot for kurdoodle (fellow kaistal trash - why am I torturing our otp? why is jongin dumb?)

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kurdoodle January 28 2016, 06:56:28 UTC
so sorry for replying so late ( ... )

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douc January 30 2016, 11:43:27 UTC
ok THIS COMMENT MADE ME CRY STOP U R TOO SWEET TO ME - EVERYONE READING THIS IS ( ... )

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douc January 17 2016, 10:38:02 UTC
spot for silentlybelieve (can we write happier kaistal tgt?)

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silentlybelieve January 18 2016, 05:06:28 UTC
Sorry, she didn’t want to stand around and have a nice chit-chat about how the ‘traitor’s new fashion line is going. Maybe she can get all her other eight ‘sisters’ to promote her brand on their world tour. Cute.SAVAGE, but I love it so much. Again, I love how raw this whole thing is. Saying the things that I'm sure a lot of people are thinking (myself included), and I love how you portray Soojung's thoughts. This is only part 2 so how am I supposed to last throughout the rest of this story? You're killing me here ( ... )

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douc January 20 2016, 00:41:31 UTC
I CAN ONLY SHADE SOME OF THE SNSD GIRLS OFF /COUGH/ AND NOT BE PROBLEMATIC WHEN WRITING ABOUT IT THROUGH SOOJUNG'S PERSPECTIVE ( ... )

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xkayye January 19 2016, 17:34:05 UTC
Hi!! It's me again :3
Your comment reply made me smile and I can't help but squeal when you said we thought the same about the TOPstal wine situation.
Now, on to my comment for this chapter:
JONGIN YOU CHICKEN!
I feel like this chapter puts Krystal in a harder situation and that the presence of TOP and Sehun, although they're quite different, helps Krystal cope in some way but I feel heartbroken when Taemin called her about Jongin.

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douc January 20 2016, 00:28:53 UTC
I'll spot for you next time!

Topstal is that couple you'd meet at some classy house party and they'd be sitting in their own corner, drinking wine and talking about art or talking shit about someone's interior choices. You'd hate them but also want to be them cause they look like some classy socialite couple that came straight out of a NYC show lol

All I can tell you now that Taemin and Krystal have a lot in common issues but cope with it in a really different way. I really enjoyed writing that contrast so I hope you look forward to it.

Thanks for dropping by to leave a common bb xx

(also do you have twitter or anything cause I need at least one topstal friend on my tlist lol!!)

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xkayye January 20 2016, 13:17:37 UTC
A SPOT?! HOW KIND OF YOU /dies
I feel so honored, thank you so much <3
We shall definitely talk about TOPSTAL a lot XD (possibly imagine scenarios for them too mwihi)
And I think that they'll be the couple touring around europe a lot too bc museum and art, take each other's sophisticated photo on tourist spots and maybe a selfie or two. /sigh
lowkey thinking it's about Sulli that's got Taemin with a common issue with Krystal. but I could be wrong lols
I do have a twitter but I don't use it for k-pop sadly ><
Skype? Tumblr?

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douc January 20 2016, 23:22:05 UTC
i can see them doing that whenever they have the time to getaway. And they'd go to all these fancy restaurants and drink wine, while people watching. They'd take selfies - the first one will be a visual slayage and then after that, they're all silly faces and t.o.p doing weird things lol
you could be right, you could be wrong /mwahaha/

yup my tumblr is: chalys.tumblr.com and ig? or is that not really helpful? lol

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nicxsehun February 1 2016, 14:39:40 UTC
this one of the most heartwrenching fics i have ever read in my entire life, and trust me, i have read a looooot of fics hehe
i love u and i love ur writing

this was really sad idk i love paIN WHY DO I LOVE PAIN

idk i just really love this i have nothing to say i am irrelevant

goodbye

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douc February 1 2016, 23:34:46 UTC
Nah you're relevant because your dp is Suga lol

Ahhh it's so (weirdly) lovely to hear that this and my writing is heart wrenching but you like it!
Girl join the angst club tbh, I can't write happy stuff to save my life lol We're such pessimists lol

COME BACK /hugs/

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nicxsehun February 2 2016, 05:46:07 UTC
I caME BACK~~~~ /hugs you back/

ahhhh the swag master yoongi is always relevant hahaha

yes i do hahaha i really like fics that make me feel (whether really happy or really sad) bc i am really emotionless in general hahaha but /sighs/ literally 99.9% of kaistal fic is angst so i've been drowning in it lately because it's all i've been reading hehehe

even if you can't write happy stuff your angst is already so on point keep it up girl *o*

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douc February 2 2016, 08:13:27 UTC
BB SUGA IS SO PRECIOUS! I like BTS music and even though don't really stan them, I really like suga lol It's impossible not to!

LOL I bet you have a rbf but you're not emotionless. Yeah lol Kaistal writers seem to favour angst but then the ship refuses to be fluffy (or interact at all) so I can see why. I know a few good kaistal fluff tho so tell me if you want to read them, I can link you xx

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