color schemes (2/?)

[douc]

color schemes (2/?)
~ 3,400 w, pg13, (kai/krystal/sulli/minho/taemin) + (yunho/boa) l i.
Supposed, Krystal and Jinri will always be best friends, rivals too.

■ if you're lost about what's happening, it will all be cleared up in the next few chapters.
■ italic means the story's switched to the present aka boa/yunho scenes
■ fanmix = here (there's a

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[douc]

spot for bollywoodrecord

[bollywoodrecord]

YURI YOU ARE THE LITERALLY THE BEST WRITER TO HAVE EVER EXISTED

wow i should be doing chem homework instead im just gonna sit here and ogle over how perfect your writing actually is

the beginning completely caught me off guard but tbh i liked almost the…. nonchalance of it? definitely loved the added yunboa but just the whole situation in its third person perspective and jongin's confession really freaked me out and i kind of loved it at the same time. looking back at the first part, the jongin perspective seems completely twisted up even though he still hates everyone idk i love it.

UGH THE BANTERING BETWEEN JONGIN AND KRYSTAL I LIKE IT SO MUCH. tbh fic kaistal is so much better than irl kaistal likeeeeee idk so much sexual tension. sexual tension is my absolute favorite. when taemin switches seats with her and jongin is so sassy jesus christ i wish i could marry him in this fic i need a jongin in my school to be the sexy brooding type aldjf

THE COLOR THING it hurts my heart with how wonderfully your brain works

Undeterred,

[douc]

YOU FLATTER ME SFM OMG STAWP BB

I actually love writing Jong In here, he just hates everyone and hates life and ugh...typical snobby intellectual teen tbh.

what is this?! you're the one who write perf fics 24/7 ugh god

[douc]

spot for harues

[harues]

SCREAMING

[harues]

I AM SO EXCITED? IT'S LIKE GOSSIP GIRL ALL OVER AGAIN, EXCEPT WITH A MURDER.

ACK.

[douc]

I don't understand how gossip girl never had a proper murder in it when the show was that messed up

[douc]

spot for onceuponataem

[rhaineyniesta]

i can sense the tension in kaistal (¬‿¬)

[douc]

I'm afraid next chapter won't have much kaistal tho :/

[douc]

It's fine! I never gave any implication that sulli died in the first part, it's only in this chapter that I reveal it.
not sherlock inspired, saving that for a sestal one shot actually lol

[douc]

It's not mainly anyone couple...? I plan for this fic to really be circled around Sulli, if any character and the friendship/lies etc. It's supposed be a mystery, like twin peaks.
I miss HS fics too, people need to write more of those and omg you flatter me bb ♥

yes, yes, we've all been there (unfortunately)