the minnow and the trout

May 10, 2011 21:53

the minnow and the trout
1290 w, pg-13 (jooyeon/g.o)
people drift apart, but some find each other again.

sometimes, life happens. )

fandom: mblaq, ♥ : jooyeon/g.o, Ξ : withoutchange, fandom: after school

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bollywoodrecord May 11 2011, 02:32:01 UTC
Spot. :)

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bollywoodrecord May 11 2011, 02:42:26 UTC
I might attempt would attempt to write this pairing, but you're writing is beyond my limits. XD

I don't really know if you can call it angst or fluff, but I'll just call it romantic. It's killing me with the wonderfulness.

Jooyeon only nods and walks up the stone stairs. For some reason, this smooth surface seems to hurt more than the gravel of the sidewalk did.

I'm not sure if it should make me want to, but I want to shake G.O. and tell him to tell her they should get back together or something. They're love is obviously meant to be displayed to the world. Hahaha, actually, maybe not....

"You're cute," Jooyeon points out sagely before her knuckles connect with his forearm.

"You could have just kissed me with your lips, not your fist," Byunghee complains smugly.

And now I want to shake him and tell him he should kiss her, not the other way around.

But it's wonderfully amazing, nonetheless, and even though these guys aren't my OTP, I missed seeing you writing them. :) Thanks for posting, it's beeeautiful.

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weerainbow May 11 2011, 23:47:13 UTC
*blinks back tears*
This is so beautiful. I love it. You managed to pull me right in to their world and my heart connected with them both and their longing for each other that was mixed with the hesitancy that they were trying to overcome. And I love how it's not all about the ending, not all about when they get to where they want to be, but it's all about their desire to be there and how they're both trying and both taking little steps closer to each other and to each other's heart :o)
And the tears were happy tears...because there's something about these two that just feels so right. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece ♥

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