playing pretend - jun/hikari one-shot

[kouriko]

I had every intention of writing this earlier. Yesterday, actually. I had every intention of doing a lot of things yesterday.

But I pretty much passed out after work. The place closes at 9 and customers were coming in until half past that. I didn't get out for a long, long time. Then I had to forage for late-night food all over town.

:|

But anyway

Comments

[caddyeverafter7]

Guuuurl. This was so cute :D I love seeing both sides of the relationship; the times where Dawn is weak and Barry is strong and when the roles are reversed. This was just so cute though :D You have me flailing like a Magikarp.

P.S. I love the whole part about creating characters for those people. I do that sometimes XD

[kouriko]

Thank you! ♥ Writing Jun as the weaker one in this situation was actually pretty fun! Haha. I mean, since he runs around so often, I'm convinced he has practically no arm strength, anyway...

xD That game is always so fun to play.

[caddyeverafter7]

Thunder thighs :D

[chrysa]

B|||| THE TEXT IS GREY AGAIN. But the layout is so cute.

Also, I didn't see you sign on. ): Until you signed off and I was like aslkdjfl;aksj BECAUSE I HAD SOMETHING TO SHOW YOU. THAT WAS ACTUALLY NOT QMI BELIEVE IT OR NOT.

/spots will read later because my eyes are crossing

[kouriko]

GDI REALLY? I went through like four pages of layout and picked the one I thought was the most visible. Maybe I'll try to figure out how to change the color. xD

It's all right! Haha. I only logged on for like a split second and then realized I had to get up and go to work really early...AND THAT IS DISAPPOINTING. D:

I'M SORRY YOU HAVE TO SQUINT. ;-------------;

[chrysa]

I could be wrong, but if you find:

body {
background-color: #fffee7;
text-align: center;
color: #999999;
font-family: "Verdana", sans-serif;
font-size: 11px;
margin: 0 0 20px 0;
}

and change color: #999999; to color: #000000; it should be black

[feeling_thinker]

loves it! :3

[kouriko]

Thank you! ♥

[ibuberu]

I like the lightheartedness of this, you captured their relationship really well, and how close they are. And the more romantic bits weren't too forced either, so this was a pretty sweet fic to read C: I like the ongoing theme of role reversal, but how inevitably, they still just love one another and its as simple as that.

[kouriko]

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. ♥