whisk - pokegamefic summer exchange

[kouriko]

It took me forever, but I finally did my pokegamefic exchange for kimivalkyrie . Holy fuq, this was hard. Kanto characters are not my forte. Especially Green. And it had to be Green-centric. xD

Anyway, I'm glad I got this done but I'm...not sure I'm happy with it. Work's drained me, and my writing isn't like it used to be. I'm also not having a good month, so writing my

Comments

[lark]

I really liked this. I was really surprised by the twist ending-it made me laugh! I loved your usage of colors (I've had similar thoughts myself /high five) and the way you continually went back to the image of camping and gave it many angles. After finishing your fic, I went back and read the prompt, and I think you really used it spectacularly. I could see where you plucked out all your various themes and thoughts, and it was really interesting

[kouriko]

Yeah. I apologize about the purple prose that is this fic. ;----; It's definitely not my best. I feel like I reverted to some seriously old writing style in this... The style reminiscent of like my freshman year of high school where I thought bigger words were better. I don't even know. xD I tried to fix it so many times, but I couldn't even figure out where to start with it. I even considered just redoing the entire thing at one point, but I procrasinated and didn't have time to do that

[kimivalkyrie]

Oh my god. Oh my god.

/20 minutes later

Okay, I'm done spazzing. This was so well written, thank you very much. I love the idea of Leaf being the person who managed to get Red to talk, haha. ♥ I enjoyed this very very much and you fulfilled it well. Thank you thank you thank you.

[kouriko]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ♥