LJ Idol Week 2

[kotenok_angel]

She never realized what was going on. Never in a million years would she have dreamed it. But it happened and now here she was, lying in a hospital room, her right leg in a cast and in traction, her left wrist also in a cast and several pillows behind her, propping her up

Comments

[jexia]

Liked the story! (Hate the pink, though, sorry.)

[kagomeshuko]

I agree on hating the color scheme!

[halfshellvenus]

Yes, the color hurts! Very reflective (causes glare) in addition to being bright.

I'm glad the narrator survived. She doesn't have a name, BTW-- but the mother could have named her in that "Oh!" sentence, and that would have been okay and not awkward. (sometimes it's hard to know where to insert info about a first-person narrator).

[kehlen]

Perfect ending.

(You don't have to declare a bye to miss a week, but doing so makes it easier for the maintainers.)

[kotenok_angel]

Thank you! (not a big fan of pink myself! It's in need of a slight change)

[kotenok_angel]

Thank you! I appreciate it!

[kagomeshuko]

Good story, but very different take on the topic than mine!