Apple of My Eye

Aug 17, 2011 18:24

Apple of My Eye
6510 words, rated PG-13
Super Junior: Yesung/Kyuhyun
Summary: Once upon a time in a faraway land, there lived a princess named Snow White. This isn't really about her, but in moments like these, Yesung can think of nothing else.
Notes: rebreak procrastinated about writing her Beast Mini-Bang fic, so I wrote this. Doesn't make sense, ( Read more... )

member: yesung, pairing: kyuhyun/yesung, group: superjunior

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babycloudy August 18 2011, 00:57:26 UTC
OH MY GAWD!!!
ASLKJDHALSKDHOWUPDHASJKDHALSKJDHLASKJDHL

WHAT IS THIS? WHAT.IS.THIS?!?!!!!!
THIS IS SO GAWD DAMN CUTE; SWEET; ROMANTIC (what else should I add?)
YOU WROTE THIS STORY IN A FUCKING REA~~~LLY GAWD BEAUTIFUL PERFECTNESS!!
GAWSH!!!! (mind my language please)

I LOVE IT SO SO MUCH!!

YESUNG ISN'T THE PRINCE EITHER ANY KNIGHTS EITHER THE DWARFS EITHER THE APPLE. YOSH! HE'S THE PRINCESS!! SJKHDLASKJDHALSJKDHASHD

AND I WAS CRAVING FOR KYUSUNG FICS THESE COUPLE OF WEEKS AND YOU WROTE THIS AND I FOUND THIS IT JUST....DIES!
GIVE YOU HUGGIES AND FLYING KISSES~~!!!! /SOBS

/READING IT ALL OVER AGAIN. YOU TOOK THE BLAME FOR MAKING ME SQUEALING LIKE THIS! ^o^//

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 00:09:17 UTC
♥Thank you, thank you!♥

Your language is fine with me. I'm not that concerned with cursing when praise is mixed in. lol

I'm so happy that you liked this! KyuSung is a super adorable pairing, and I was glad to finally write one. I will humbly accept all of the blame for squealing! =D

Thanks again, especially for the hugs and kisses!

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kyusung_addict August 18 2011, 01:11:20 UTC
OMG this is the best 'Snow white and the sever dwarfs' sorry I mean "Kyuhyun and the Seven Dorks" story I ever read ^o^
this was amazing I just love how you transformed the story to a modern version ^^ and Kangin and Heechul conversation was the best I just miss their bickering :) and the apple and the game ... God you're a genius ^o^
This is truly is one of the best suju and of course Kyusung fic I ever read ..... You are amazing and I love you for this <3

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 00:28:32 UTC
Oh, thanks so much!

♥I am so excited that you liked my attempt at KangChul humor. I was hoping it turned out fairly well, so thanks for complimenting it! :)

I feel the love radiating off your comment, so I hope you feel the love coming from mine! If not, here is a small taste...♥love♥love♥love♥!

Thank you so much for reading my little story and commenting at my little journal. It means a lot! =D

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kyusung_addict August 19 2011, 01:56:27 UTC
You are so sweet I should be the one thanking you ^^ I'm glad I made you happy with my comment you deserve much more since you made me extremely super Happy with this fic ^^ And I really wish I could show you how much I freaking ♥ love it ♥ if I wrote everything I like I'm afraid it would be longer than your fic :P
And thank you I do feel your ♥love♥ and gladly accept it *hugs* <3

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 20:12:06 UTC
I need no thanks at all. I am just stoked that you liked it!

If ever you need some love, you can come here. I have a lot to give. *hugs*

Thanks for making me smile again today! ♥love♥

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the_calen August 18 2011, 01:12:17 UTC
I really enjoyed this fic- you did a great job of re-telling a fairytale without falling into goofy parody. No lie, I was grinning at my screen through the whole thing.

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 00:33:20 UTC
Thank you so very much!

I appreciate your comment, but I'm sure your computer screen is kind of creeped out with all your grinning. I personally love it, though!

Again, you have made me very happy today, so thanks! :)

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meiixin August 18 2011, 01:18:55 UTC
kyaaa. yayy.
happy endings for all~
too cute xD thanks for linking me.
Yesung's so head over heels it turned him into a dork. x3

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 00:36:45 UTC
I'm glad you finally got to read the whole story. Thanks for following the link and continuing the awkward love that is KyuSung! Love for you! <3

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myhlum August 18 2011, 01:24:48 UTC
BCOABCJBSBCVHVDNKKCB
this is so much love
i can't even say
the right words
to say. but i love this.
i love thid.
and i love this.

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kotahcola August 19 2011, 00:39:49 UTC
The right words are completely relative. To me, you said all the right things!

Thank you, thank you for reading and commenting! =D
You are making me super happy, so thanks for that, as well!

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