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Criminal Minds-- Made You Look

Jan 22, 2011 20:42

Title: Criminal Minds-Made You Look
Author: kosmickway
Rating: TEEN
Pairing: Rossi/Prentiss
A/N: For the alphabet meme prompt, B is for baby. Takes place season 4. For zamboni12 … it’s probably not the baby story you were thinking of when you gave me the prompt, but it’s what came into my head. Hope you like it anyway.

( National Geographic wouldn’t even post something this … this … ugh. )

fan fic--criminal minds, fan fic

Comments 9

smacky30 January 23 2011, 02:37:48 UTC

LOL! There is nothing more beautiful than the birth of a baby - but I don't think I want to see pictures of somebody actually birthing one. That's just WRONG! Great story. Love the R/P interaction. :D

kosmickway January 23 2011, 03:01:24 UTC

LOL. Thanks! There's a book in our store from the 1970s called "A Child is Born" and it has the most AWFUL graphic pictures of women giving birth ... it shows every single possible position from standing up to lying down, it shows close-ups of, like, EVERYTHING, and it goes into excruciating detail in the text. So that's where the idea came from ... that and several of my friends who've had kids sending equally as excruciating emails describing every single detail of the blessed event. Everything else, as far as R/P, just kind of, well, happened.

Glad you liked :)

mingsmommy January 23 2011, 03:58:48 UTC

Oh I loved this!

I am not a fan of the whole filming the birth thing, but if you want to, okay...but please don't share.

I really, really loved the Dave/Emily part. Their exchange in the kitchen is wonderful. I love how sexy, how funny, how tender and easy they are with each other.

Great work!

kosmickway January 23 2011, 15:04:00 UTC

Thanks! I still feel so new to this pairing that I'm never show if they're working or not. I'm glad they seem to be!

serialbathera January 23 2011, 07:09:05 UTC

What an excellent story :)

zamboni12 January 23 2011, 12:59:42 UTC

Oh, what a brilliant story.
I like the seriousness in it: exposing almost every detail of peoples life; it´s probably in peoples mentality to crave for sensation, to gloat over someone misfortune etc.

The interaction between Rossi and Emily in the kitchen is too cute and sexy. I love the easiness and closeness they share with each other.

Yeah, you´re right, I actually expected something else but you never cease to amaze me, this is a gorgeous use of the prompt. Thanks!

kosmickway January 23 2011, 15:03:16 UTC

*grin* SO glad you like it! I try to buck convention whenever possible. Thank you for your kind words ... they mean so much to me, especially because I'm so new to the pairing.

:-)) anonymous August 21 2012, 20:35:09 UTC

sorry for anonymity (no account here), but I couldn't pass by - your story is absolutely amazing and so in character! thank you very much, your writing is just excellent, it was such a pleasure to read this. The reader is SOOOOO happy ))

Re: :-)) kosmickway August 21 2012, 21:25:45 UTC

Gosh, thanks! I'm always glad to have readers! This was incredibly silly to write but also fun as well :) Thanks for stopping by ... hope you'll enjoy the rest of my criminal minds fic under the fan fic-- criminal minds tag at my journal. Thanks again!