Euphoria

Apr 19, 2006 01:03

Okay, here is my first ever drabble. Not as bad as I thought it would be.

This is for Alisanne

A 100 word, Bill and Wood Drabble.

Many many thanks to knightmare_shad , for the looking it over,and help in getting it on here. :) :)

Euphoria )

bill weasley

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alisanne April 19 2006, 05:33:21 UTC
Ahahahahaha! You scared me, Kosh. As I was reading I was thinking... "did I confuse him? Does he think I wanted het? Eeek!" The end was perfect and brilliant. Sneaky, but brill.

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koshweasley April 19 2006, 06:06:21 UTC
Okay, let's try again. I have been having technical difficulties tonight.

I am very happy you liked this. It was hard to keep it at a hundred words.

I got the mis-direct from one of knightmare_shad's fics.

Really glad you liked it. :)

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alisanne April 19 2006, 06:15:15 UTC
It was hard to keep it at a hundred words.

Yes, that's the point with drabbles, I'm afraid. You have to decide what's crucial to tell the story. I've found it to be a good writing exercise, myself.

And yes, km is the queen of the misdirect. I sensed her deft touch in there. *g*

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wolfiekins April 19 2006, 06:09:54 UTC
*snickers*

Ali doesn't know you very well, yet, does she?

*sighs, shakes head*

Angel, indeed! *winks*

Very imaginative, and funny! Excellent first drabble, love!

*beams*

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First drabble -respond koshweasley April 19 2006, 06:30:09 UTC
Thanks :) I had made it really short, and it was still 154 words. So, I cut and trimmed and made it 100. Then I changed a word here, ten words here, and it was at 125. Cut, cut, cut, and this was the end result.

I thought it would be a horrible experience, but it was quite fun.

Glad you liked it:)

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Re: First drabble -respond evilauntiesnape April 19 2006, 11:28:28 UTC
Yeah - Angel, indeed. Angel Rug Rat, more like. LOL

VERY well done. I must say, I was momentarily taken aback too. "KOSHIE is going to write het? The Apocalypse is surely upon us!"

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Re: First drabble -respond koshweasley April 19 2006, 15:51:08 UTC
Thank you! It wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. The ending part was the part I kept changing. I didn't have the Mrs. Weasley, part in there, and I wanted it in. I had two endings to choose from too, like I told you via text mess. Marvin, a guy I work with, said he liked the romancy one better, than the jokey one. So that is what we ended up with.

I hope I do as well with the others.

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lena3 April 19 2006, 17:20:27 UTC
I wondered over here to thank you for your comments on Matildabishop's LJ for Never Tell. Thank you, and yes, Ron tends to have a one track mind about loads of things. :)

I saw the Bill/Oliver and clicked. Then, like others, I thought I clicked the wrong thing! Good job! I like twists and turns, makes it fun! :)

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koshweasley April 20 2006, 04:17:33 UTC
Any time. I love the red heads.

I like the twists too, keeps the mind active, when you are drooling on your laptop.

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