We Should Tell Them (1/5)

Jul 04, 2012 00:09

            
            Jeff moaned into the mouth of the beautiful woman who was currently straddling him on the study room couch as she used her teeth to gently pull on his lower lip.  “We really shouldn’t be doing this.”  Annie smiled, feeling his moan on her lips more than hearing it, before letting out a long, low moan of her own when Jeff ( Read more... )

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iknowitsbutters July 4 2012, 17:07:46 UTC
Glad crittab planted the seed for you to bring one of my fave fics here - and that you'll wrap it up soon as well. Hopefully you get more fans here to close it all out.

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fangirl_101 July 5 2012, 12:43:08 UTC
I remember reading this at FF.net but I'm really glad you're posting the whole thing here! I rarely visit FF and so I only read this chapter and then forgot about going back to check for more updates. This is a great setup and I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to J/A's relationship. You've got a great handle on the characters--they don't feel OOC at all.

Just a suggestion for posting fic... There's a format people follow when posting fic to the main community page.

Title:
Author:
Rating:
Spoilers:
Disclaimer:

You don't have to do this, it's just what's usually done.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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nyclove3 July 5 2012, 23:52:23 UTC

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