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One Touch and I'd Be In - PG-13 [Pin]

Jan 07, 2008 22:13

Title: One Touch and I'd Be In
Author: Kamika Farinas aka tinyangl
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Words: 1729
Pairing: Pin [Akanishi Jin/Yamashita Tomohisa]
Summary: A Sequel to Control is Paper Thin. Yamapi has a lot to think about when it comes to his life, but he doesn't want to think - especially not when it involves Jin.
Author's Note: Technically, I had ( Read more... )

pin we love, yamapi, this is rated pg-13, tinyangl, this is a little bit angst

Comments 11

bitofpixiedust January 8 2008, 03:14:50 UTC

THIS IS MY FAVORITE THING EVER ALONG WITH THAT OTHER ONE I WISH I COULD LEAVE YOU ANOTHER EPIC COMMENT BUT I CAN'T MANAGE ONE WHEN I'M FLAILING SO HARD.
I LOVE YOU.I DO.FOREVER AND EVER AND EVAH

tinyangl January 8 2008, 04:14:32 UTC

Thanks SO MUCH LINDSAY. SERIOUSLY. I LOVEYOU TOO FOREVER AND EVER. <3333333 And no need for an epic comment! The other one you left me was SO LOVELY. Plus all the messages on MSN. <3333

4_03_am January 8 2008, 03:27:38 UTC

OHGOD this just reminded me of the first on. I LOVE THAT ONE SO SO SO MUCH. *_________________________*

tinyangl January 8 2008, 04:17:33 UTC

: DDDDDDDDDD I'm so glad! It had the same air as the first one, ne? :D

musikologie January 8 2008, 03:31:11 UTC

Oh, guh. I love the first one and I love this one and why do you kill me so. YamapiYamapiYamapi, indeed. ;___________;

tinyangl January 8 2008, 04:19:54 UTC

Awwww!!! Thank you so much!!! I'm really glad you liked and um.. T.T to Yamapi too. I agree. @.@

timedhappiness January 8 2008, 03:59:57 UTC

I'm so dumb! LOL So I thought I clicked onto the link that referred to the first part so I read the sequel first thinking it wasn't the sequel which is why I was like... in mad chaos screaming out to my sister next to me who didn't understand why I was freaking out about having no real ending. LOL man oh man I'm so out of it. T_T

I LOVE ME PIN. Yay Yamapi is considering Jin and truly being with him now. <33333

You know I really like how the sexual relationships played out in this story. I think it was able to level things at a deeper and darker level of intimacy and raciness and I also feel like... it really showed Jin and Yamapi's dire need for one another. It was beautifully tragic.

I really enjoyed reading your story and your writing. ^^

tinyangl January 13 2008, 06:16:09 UTC

*giggles* It's okay dear. I'm glad you figured it out though! And were able to get how it ended up working, ne?

I know right?! I needed a happier ending after that last one and this one flew from my fingers like nobody's business. :D I'm so glad you really like that!

I always find it FASCINATING when people get so indepth into my writing - it amazes me because I personally never find my own writing to be anything other than what's on the surface. I did try to show that Jin and Yamapi needed each other on levels that they didn't even understand but completely couldn't resist and I'm so glad that was portrayed well. Definitely tragic, I think.

I'm SO glad! Thank you for reading. <3

akathesia January 8 2008, 04:16:57 UTC

I remembered how much I loved the first fic after the reread and the sequel definitely does it justice!

Despite the depressing premise it’s ultimately hopeful & makes me want to squish them! They love each other!! /woobie

tinyangl January 13 2008, 06:17:24 UTC

*beams brightly* I'm so glad in so many ways! I was so worried the sequel was much too wordy and had too much exposition. So I'm glad you thought it did it justice!

Definitely a depressing premise - I hadn't originally thought it'd be so miserable, but yay to happy endings. Or as happy as this world can lend itself. *laughs*