Control is Paper Thin - PG-13 [Pin]

[korette_destiny]

Title: Control is Paper Thin
Author: Kamika Farinas aka tinyangl
Rating: PG-13
Words: 893
Pairing: Pin, hint of Pi!het
Summary: Jin never wants to lose control, but when he's with Yamapi, he finds himself breaking that rule.
Author's Note: Conversation with shatteredinu led to this creation. Attempt at cheating!fic. (In the middle of Japanese class so... the summary

Comments

[saturnianlove]

I LOVE IT

I mean, Yamapi cheating is ://// but it's with Jin because they belong together! So I still love it. The passion.

because nothing, nobody matters to him more than Yamapi and making Yamapi happy is all he has ever, would ever want to do.
melts. I love your words throughout this.

He thinks that he'll have Yamapi kissing him awake after a couple of hours, because he's horny again and wants another round. He just wants to wake up, maybe before Yamapi just to watch him sleep and take in the beauty that is both his best friend and lover.
I LOVE YOUR WORDS THROUGHOUT THIS

[korette_destiny]

Awww! :D I'm glad!

I'm not the biggest fan either, that's why I kinda... I don't condone it at all, but at least... They're NOT going to cheat anymore? @.@ My way of.... um... making things better. XP

I'm so glad you liked how I wrote it!!! Ahahaah, I actually kinda thought it was a bit of a mess. Mainly because I wasn't sure what I was doing while writing, but I'm glad some things worked. *laughs*

[partypaprika]

OH kami. Oh kami. This is so beautiful and descriptive and just gorgeous. I lovelove your description of them entering the room and the darkness, all while Jin needs this control. And yet really has no control over the situation. I loved how you wrote the morning after scene, because this is how it's always been with Jin waking up alone. And yet, despite it, there's a happy(-er) ending. I love how you never know what Yamapi is really thinking, whether he's regretting it, why he makes these decisions--you only have Jin's persepective. Really I just love everything about this fic. It's absolutely amazing. If I knew how to do hearts, there would be a million here.

[korette_destiny]

Awwwww... Alena!!! :D I have never had the word description linked to my writing. I kinda fail at descriptions in my opinion so I'm glad that you thought it was well. *_______________________* And and.. Yes! And yeah. And um. Yamapi. His POV. And just. Right. Sequel? XP Maybe. And ahahahaah. Hearts is "&hearts"; without the "" likeeee ♥ ILULOts for commenting! :D

[korette_destiny]

Guh. It's &"hearts". Apparently you can make hearts even without the ; Who knew. XP so &hearts

[pixisticks]

YAY, YOU POSTED IT! ♥ As soon as I'm done with my homework tonight I'll finish up editing the last ficlet. :3

[korette_destiny]

Yes I did!!! :D Don't worry dear, take your time. ^_^ It's apparently not like I don't have other stuff to post. XP With all the random stuff I'm churning out. ~_~

[pixisticks]

Hee. I actually have it done, so when I'm done with today's homework I'll jump on MSN and send it to ya. <3

[4_03_am]

[korette_destiny]

Hahaha, Oh Rhey. ILU. I also like the heart. Where'd that come from?

[musikologie]

I wasn't expecting the ending at all, and it hit me right in the gut, and it *hurts* but it's so *good*. I loved how Jin was afraid of getting too close, and how Yamapi's note was folded many times (oh, the many implications of that *kill*) and a;sldfj;laksjkl.

<3333333

[korette_destiny]

Is it weird that I hadn't quite expected the ending? XP I'm glad that it was an effective one though. And um. Yeah!!! :D I had to throw in that Yamapi's note was folded many times, because well... It carried a lot, I think. And just... Whee!!!! :D I'm so glad you liked!!! ^_^