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50 Sentences: MerlinxArthur

Apr 28, 2009 20:08

Title: 50 Sentences: MerlinxArthur, part 1
Author: Rissa
Pairing: MerlinxArthur
Rating: PG to PG-13 overall (this time)
Word Count: 4,474
Notes: Written using 1fandom's third theme set for 50 sentences, though they pretty much break every rule requiring them to be a "sentence" in length, save for the period at the end.

A/N: Huge thanks to analineblue for being a ( Read more... )

Comments 15

jazzy_peaches April 29 2009, 03:21:13 UTC

♥ I will continue being supremely awesome if it means you continue to write stuff like this. :D

Ok my comments:

1. I really enjoyed your take on "While" - very creative.
2. "Distraction" was one of my favorites; I like reading Arty's point of view.
3. lololol I thought "Violet" was so supercute. XD
4. "Show" = Win. Enough said.
5. I loved "Think" as well because the crazy disjointed pseudo-sentence style really fits the "story" well. Its very post-traumatic-stress-train-of-thought. So kudos on that! :)
6. Also, in a completely non-biased opinion :P I thought "Nothing" was awesome and I think its great where you ran with the idea. XD

All in all...great job! Gold star! :D

kooriyoukai April 29 2009, 03:29:26 UTC

Clearly I'm doing something right since I seem to be collecting a vast assortment of gold stars from you lately :D ♥

And you know I'll be writing more -- there's a whole 'nother 25 prompts to get through! (And to be honest I'm itching to write porn now XD)

Thank you for being so much awesomesauces <333

kooriyoukai April 29 2009, 03:36:29 UTC

6. Also, in a completely non-biased opinion :P I thought "Nothing" was awesome and I think its great where you ran with the idea. XD

I think you might be amused to know that I had this running litany in my head about Na and Cl combining to make salt the entire time I was writing it :P Who knew chemistry could be so inspiring? XDD

gallifreycalls April 29 2009, 04:24:37 UTC

Absolutely beautiful writing. I'm very much looking forward to the next half of the (Faulkner-length) sentences and any other works you might dabble in for Merlin.

jaksphantom2 April 29 2009, 04:42:57 UTC

Hands down #18 was my fav XD

Completely adorable.

laurapetri April 29 2009, 05:06:54 UTC

Such excellent tantalizing glimpses of them

andropovka April 29 2009, 06:05:23 UTC

Lovely! Absolutely lovely! They are like snapshots of possibilities, and tender/heart-breaking moments. :)

Thank you for writing and sharing this!