Comments | koori_no_king: Essay -- Family Ties

koori_no_king

Essay -- Family Ties

Oct 27, 2008 18:01

( Family ties )

family, hyoutei, mother, friends, grandma, kabaji, english, writing assignment, blood matters not, parenting, mamalie

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ooc: hitokirikite October 27 2008, 16:52:55 UTC

I'm really impressed. It's very well writen and you just want to hug poor Atobe. And I love how he describes each of his "family members". the annoying baby brother always seeking to surpass me...perfect.

But now you have me writing out Kite's essay... which will in no way look half as good as this...

Re: ooc: koori_no_king October 27 2008, 17:09:03 UTC

Well, I should hope that an English major can come up with an acceptable essay =P But thank you. *bows* I'm glad you liked it.

Ah, do keep in mind that Kite's only has to about a quarter of this length; Atobe went over 900 words...

Re: ooc: hitokirikite October 27 2008, 17:12:03 UTC

I approve!! major well used!

And Kite's ended up with 666 words...which is twice the amount of the words he had been assigned... so really, that should be an accomplishment in itself...damn over acheiver

Re: ooc: koori_no_king October 27 2008, 17:18:20 UTC

(With a minor in Education, too. =P I'm going to be Ryoga?)

...Iiiinteresting number. XD

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