Check (One-shot)

[konicoffee]

Title: Check
Chapters: n/a
Author: konicoffee
Genre: Angst
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters in this story.
Warnings: Mentions of attempted suicide.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Saga/Shou, mention of Kenzo (Ayabie)/Shou
Synopsis: Saga and Shou play a little game of chess.
Comments: Requested by roku_kitty whose Alice Nine fics are like freshly

Comments

[roku_kitty]

I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT

one moment, and then I'll wipe the doofusy grin off my face and make a real comment

[konicoffee]

YAY, I'm glad you like it. :DDD thank you so much, I really enjoyed writing this one! You were right, this pairing is awesome. <3

[roku_kitty]

Okay, okay, first, this whole concept kills me. Them playing chess, the logical game, while Saga is trying to convince Shou to let go of Kenzo and see him instead.

“Why can’t you get over him, Shou?” He asked me in that deep, kind voice of his. I said nothing as I nervously moved a knight back towards me. I needed him there to strengthen my defenses. He moved his queen one step to my right, getting it ready to attack. His eyes were still fixed on me.

THIS. I love how their moves in the game are reflecting what they're feeling, Shou trying to hide and protect himself and Saga striving forward like a KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR. I love how you wrote him, all quiet and stately, but got clumsy knocking over the pieces at the end when he moved towards Shou.

“I would do anything,” the bassist said, lifting a black knight off the board. “I would give anything.” My eyes widened as he took one of my pawns with his knight, placing it right beside my king. “Anything, Shou, to make you happy.”AND SACRIFICING THE KNIGHT FOR SHOU. ;A; *mini

[konicoffee]

Squeee! <3 that's exactly what I wanted to convey, and I'm so glad you liked it.

And no need to ask, I'm definitely writing more of this pairing in the future. They're just gorgeous! :D

[pelting_rain]

YES, A BRILLIANT FIC INDEED! I really really like this. Firstly, the concept and the plot if very original. (: And secondly, it's really touching! Keep it up! =D

[konicoffee]

I went "YAAAY" out loud (in a squealy voice) when I read your comment. XD I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you so much!

[chirorimeaa]

This was awesome. I love how you wrote the story, really enjoyed reading this one! Honestly, Shou was so lucky that he got Saga in the end, Saga is such an angel ♥ XD

Now I want more *-*

[konicoffee]

I'm happy you liked it. This was enjoyable to write. :) yes, Saga is an angel. And he's deadly at chess. XD

I'll definitely be writing more Alice Nine fics. I'll do other pairings too, but I'll most likely do more Saga/Shou because they're just awesome.

Thank you very much for reading! :)

[chirorimeaa]

Yeeees please do. I'm looking forward for your other stories with Saga/Shou pairing. They are just soooo sweet together, Those two were just made for eachother ~♥ :D

[delikizzz]

i love it!!! the way you write the stories is beautiful. good job!!!

[konicoffee]

Thank you so much for reading. :) glad you liked it!

[colberry]

Oh. <3

Those two last lines killed me...

[konicoffee]

Thank you so much. <333