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Persona 3 Fanfiction - Wordless

Nov 02, 2008 20:51

Title: Wordless

Series: Persona 3
Characters & Pairing: Shinjiro x Akihiko
Genre: Romance, Angst, Tragedy
Rating: PG-13 for the boy-love
Spoilers: BIG OCTOBER SPOILERS!!!
Warnings: None
Status: Complete

Summary: Shinjiro's preference for expressing himself through actions instead of words had never bothered Akihiko.

Written as a thank you gift for the ever- ( Read more... )

fanfic, persona 3, shinjiro/akihiko

Comments 15

emotionalspazz November 2 2008, 22:26:54 UTC

So when he spoke rather than reaching for him, it hurt more

The calloused pads of his fingers burnt the message into Akihiko’s flesh in a way speech could never achieve.

THESE parts were really... whoa for me. Simple, but really moving.

Very good work.

koneko_zero November 2 2008, 22:42:48 UTC

Thank you very much... I'm really glad you enjoyed it! =]

sparkism November 2 2008, 23:18:30 UTC

Oh god, that last line. D:
This was so sweet yet sad. Fantastic job. ♥

koneko_zero November 2 2008, 23:37:48 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.

The last line was actually one of the first things I came up with after the general premise. I'm pleased you thought it fit. =]

kichara November 3 2008, 12:13:15 UTC

Oh man, the end of this is so good and so bad at the same time... T____T

koneko_zero November 3 2008, 14:38:08 UTC

Umm, thank you? I'm hoping you mean "bad" in a sad, angst-y way... In any case, I'm glad you thought it was at least half good.

kichara November 3 2008, 14:40:48 UTC

lol, sorry I meant bad is an angsty. Because Aki and Shinji's story is just way too depressing and tragic, hence the "bad".

koneko_zero November 3 2008, 15:19:52 UTC

In that case, I'll go back to feeling all proud and embarrassed. =] Thanks!

Oh, I really wish they could've had a happier ending... I always dread getting to October because I cry every time.

natsumi_chian November 14 2008, 16:51:10 UTC

damn, love it *___*

koneko_zero November 30 2008, 21:43:11 UTC

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply (I've pretty much been non-existant online these past couple of weeks, for various reasons) but thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. =D

natsumi_chian December 2 2008, 08:57:03 UTC

LOL I don't mind XD XD
your welcome! :D

bacon_sensei December 2 2008, 03:12:11 UTC

GAH, I'm so sorry I didn't reply for so long! I actually read the fic as soon as I got your comment, but life's been preventing me from actually sitting down and leaving a decent comment ( ... )

koneko_zero December 2 2008, 19:27:27 UTC

I'm pretty certain I strongly resemble a tomato right now... Thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked it. Don't worry about it taking a while to get back to me - I know all too well how that is.

To be honest, I think my brain's in overload due to all the complements there. All I can say is, well, thank you so much... It really doesn't cover how grateful I am for all those kind words and the feelings behind them, but it's all I've really got, so, thank you ( ... )