The Scarlet Pimpernel - Where's the Girl (君はどこに）

[konata_01]

Hiragana mixed with some basic kanji. Plus translation~
If you really want the romanization, just ask. I'll comment with it. I'm just in a bit of a hurry right now ^^
If there are any mistakes, please tell me, okay? ^_^

Comments

[lelek]

That's actually quite good! The one thing I noticed that isn't strictly wrong is that 「今はどこに消えたのか」 and 「今はどこにいるのか」 aren't really the same question. Since 消える has the implication of disappearing while いる is just being [somewhere]. So the first translation seems sound to me, but I would translate the second as just "where is she now?"

But that's totally my opinion and not A Fact since, like I said, your version isn't necessarily wrong. Just a nuance/implication thing. ^^;

[konata_01]

Thanks so much~ ^^
The app Kotoba! on my iPod Touch is now my new best friend ^_~

And considering that I haven't studied grammar in a whole lot of detail (the last thing I remember learning in Japanese class was ながら。Such a slow pace, LOLXD) I'm glad you think it turned out well :D

That was great!

[amintajuliette]

Thank you so much for the translation, I've wished so much to know what this song says. I've heard the english ver and is so sublime...
Thanks again, I can wait to see the musical again with this translation at hand! That's gonna be great!
You're great!

Re: That was great!

[konata_01]

Nice to know that there are Takarazuka fans that have seen my translation and actually like it. LOLXD

I'm glad it was of some use ^_^/

HI

[krisins]

Thanks so much for making translation for this song. I am going to cover this song and i wonder if i can use this translation and credit you?

Rechecking kanji lyric

[krisins]

Hi, nice to meet you and thanks so much for this translation.

I have found 2 hiragana characters that are not correspondence with singing:

From 4th line of the top : もえる　ひとみ俺をこが(す)もだえさせた少女 --> i hear it is not su but shi
From second of the bottom line: 今も　君のひとみ(お)えて -> I hear original singing is mo not o.

Could you recheck again with original kanji? Is this kanji here is taken from original booklet? Thank you very much before hand

Re: Rechecking kanji lyric

[konata_01]

Sorry for the really, REALLY late reply. XD ^^;;

Yes, of course you can use the translation (if you don't mind the likely mistakes in it ^^;;)!

And yes, there are mistakes in the hiragana because I was writing it out by ear. I have the actual CD now, so I could probably check (although I'm normally inept if the kanji is in too small a font for me to check stroke count...-_-)