Finding Balance

[kokoro2]

Title: Finding Balance
Pairings: USUK
Rating: R/M
Warnings: Sex
Summary: While their family has grown, some things just never change.
(Off-shot of Hospital Flowers.)

Comments

[binni]

fkdlskf Oh my god. This is what I've been waiting for. That was ... so cute, and touching, and lovely, and adorable, and hilarious, and sexy, and perfect, and so many other adjectives. Perfect. ♥

[hoshiko2]

You were waiting for exactly this? Haha! Well then I'm glad I made your dream come true, in a way. :D

[hadamega_ne]

*vigorous laughter* I love the descriptions of Grace. She's so cute. The fact that she punched Ashley instead of pulling hair or scratching is more than I would've done at that age. XD What an adorable kid! Her fathers taught her how to fight, huh (20 bucks on Alfred)?

I wasn't sure:

. . . a secretive hand job on the car when Grace was on the playground . . .

Was that supposed to be "in the car" instead? If not, let me know

[hoshiko2]

Oh dear. Yes, I just noticed that. You're right, it is a mistake. I'll go back and fix that. (Although sex ON the car would be hilarious too.)

Ah, thank you so much. I just like to sort of let loose on stories. I've done so in the past, but they haven't been very good and this one received a lot of attention, so I'm especially glad that everyone else had just as much fun. And I don't mind if you're quiet on the stream or on my stories, just as long as you enjoy them.

Thanks again!

[ahr0]

OMG! Lady, this was friggin' amazing on SO many different levels! You did an amazing job making Grace the cutest little girl! I really like that she's Hispanic, too. That's really sweet. :3 Al and Art's interactions with her were just spot on. You couldn't have made their reactions to her any better.

And then the sex... OMG. Just. PERFECT!

You did a wicked amazing job on this! Perfect little oneshot to go along with Hospital Flowers. <3

[hoshiko2]

HAHA! I TOLD YOU I WOULD DO IT! Heh heh. It was too amusing to pass up.

The sex was just spur of the moment, save for that one line I told you about, but I'm so happy everyone enjoyed it. Haha!

[phox99]

Oh my what a sweet little family unit!
And Alfred's exsues were t cute.

[hoshiko2]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

[gemifie]

can't. handle. cuteness.

can't. handle. the. ISDLJB;LADKFJB UNF.

Adorable ; A ; and hot *7* I absolutely love Grace, she's so cute and omg I can't help but imagine a future sibling for her. *///A///* iyaaa and augh, I can't with the smut scene. I can't. XD hilarious and oh my god, while reading it [the smut], my seven year old cousin pops up behind me and asks me "What are you reading? What's lust?" I freaked out, I turned my swivel chair but she kept trying to look. I panicked and closed my laptop. //flail

but heehee exercise. heeheehee @///u///@

[hoshiko2]

Haha! I'm so glad you liked it so much! I was very nervous about Grace's reception, but it's been so positive that I feel much better!

Oh jeez. That sounds embarrassing as hell! I'm glad it ended well enough, though. :3