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[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 18/20

Jan 28, 2011 22:05

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with Canada and OCs
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, language, allusions to sex, minor violence
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but ( Read more... )

and all that jazz

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hoshiko2 January 29 2011, 06:29:38 UTC

Thanks. I'm not at the moment, but I hope I will be tomorrow.

This chapter took me way too long to write, it was just too sad even for me. I just kept playing "Love the Way You Lie" over and over again to get it out. >

thisiskanta January 29 2011, 06:27:49 UTC

This chapter took me a lot longer than usual to read. Just cuz well... it's kind of hard with all the tension goin' on. Seriously. I had to go look at something else, or get up and walk around to take a breather before reading on after every section or so. Ahh they're both so hurt...

hoshiko2 January 29 2011, 06:30:33 UTC

They are, but they still miss each other. Greatly. But don't know the other does too. That's the worst part.

chiisana00 January 29 2011, 09:33:48 UTC

People seems ot get sick quite often these days x___x Damn winter D:

And uuuuuuurgh the angst!!! -Aches- ;____________; Me like how you include Alfred's POV as well. Then again.... Uuuuuuuuurgh, the angst TT~TT;;;

hoshiko2 January 29 2011, 17:21:12 UTC

I'm a very weak person, physically. I often get sick easily. Winter is by far the worst time for me.

Expect a different POV next chapter. :3

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hoshiko2 January 29 2011, 17:19:58 UTC

Al and Arthur are both alone. Arthur may have Matt, but we have yet to see all of Al's side. Both boys are to blame. They both messed up. And now they can't fix what they know is broken.

And I said not to reveal anything from the contest. You just helped someone else. =.= oRZ

riiyacub January 29 2011, 17:42:23 UTC

Er, sorry about that. What contest? I just read "three historical" at the end of the chapter and got to thinking. Deleted the previous comments anyway.

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kasumicc January 29 2011, 13:09:27 UTC

This is sad *sobs* Both boys are way too broken, aren't they...stupid, stubborn boys that refuse to throw their pride aside. And it's driving them to insanity. Ack. Dx

Can't wait to see what's next!

hoshiko2 January 29 2011, 17:22:43 UTC

One of the reasons I love this pairing. Both are too stubborn and think they are constantly in the right. But they care for each other so much.