Spn Fic: Negligence - Chapter 11/12 (PG-13 Gen)

[kokoda2007]

Negligence by Kokoda2007
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural or the characters …
Rating: PG-13, Gen. (I hope that rating is sufficient)
Words: 3000 this chapter (about 32,500 in total so far)

Summary: Left alone by John and Dean, Sam learns that not all predators are supernatural. Pre-series (Sam aged 11, Dean 15), hurt Sam.

Supernaturaldh once again

Comments

[paint_my_wings]

Oh man!! This is intense. I love the way Dean was just laying there with Sam. Sometimes, I wonder if Dean would be that open and affectionate with Sam if Sam were younger on the show. But Dean is... Dean. But then again, if something this bad happened, who knows...

John made me really angry for a bit of the chapter, but I suppose his little attempt to place some blame on Sam was out of guilt for leaving him behind. I love Jim in this... thank god for him.

And Frank is seriously scaring the heck out of me. He's absolutely nuts.

[kokoda2007]

Thank you. I'm finally nearing the end of this fic, but decided at the last minute to throw in a little more 'pain'. I really shouldn't enjoy doing that quite so much. LOL.

[authoressnebula]

Finally FINALLY had the time to sit and read this all in one big go and DAMN. I absolutely love it! You are wicked and fantastic, and Frank officially scares the crap out of me. For reals. *shivers*

C'mon Papa, kick his ass. *nodnod*

*waits patiently for the next chappy*

~Nebula

[kokoda2007]

Damn, even I haven't read this from start to "finish", so I really hope it flowed.

I like the term 'wicked' it's better that the 'evil' that usually gets thrown my way :)

Oh, and I love everything you write and I know I've probably got plenty to catch up on - I just struggle to read and write at the same time - strange my lack of multi-tasking in that area.

[coell]

RARRR!!!!!! I AM SO MAD AT YOU FOR MAKING ME WAIT TO FIND OUT!!!! ;-D Sweet torture I guess, but JESUS. *clicks refresh over and over*

[kokoda2007]

I know, that was a mean chapter. I just didn't want the story to come to a slow 'pleasant' end, so I thought I'd toss in a little more 'pain' to steam-roll towards the finish line. LOL

[coell]

Oh, I adore pain, and this story, and you. So I hope I didn't come off as a rude reader -- you just had me all worked up. ^_^

[kokoda2007]

'cause you didn't! I'm glad I had you 'worked up'.

[facsimilii]

Kill him, Dean! :O Protect Sammy!

Yeesh, this story drives me nuts, but in a good way. Poor Sammy...

I would love to give you more intelligent responses, but this early in the morning, all I can manage are 'eek!' and 'squee!'

[kokoda2007]

Well, its late at night here - but I struggle with 'intelligent' at all hours of the day! I'm glad its driving you nuts though - in a good way of course.

[credulesque]

SDHASKDJHSKJSAHDKH *dies from heart attack*

WHATNO DEANN!!!

AHHHH

I have never been more tense in my life! O_O

MORE NOW KPLZTHX
=D

[kokoda2007]

You're tense? To ease my writer's block and 'dark thoughts' between posting, I've been writing a "vomit fic" - which is exactly what it sounds like. Now that's scary!

[credulesque]

Um...vomit!fic? I'm hesitant to ask...but...is it seriously just about....someone throwing up? O_O

=D

[kokoda2007]

Uh, yeah.

I saw someone on spnstoryfinders request something along those lines, and an idea popped into my head (Sam + vomit) and it sort of started from there. Kind of sick really. LOL.