Spn Fic: Negligence - Chapter 9/12 (PG-13 Gen)

Jun 02, 2008 10:56

Negligence by Kokoda2007
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural or the characters …
Rating: PG-13, Gen. (I hope that rating is sufficient)
Words: 2400 this chapter (about 26,000 in total so far)

Summary: Left alone by John and Dean, Sam learns that not all predators are supernatural. Pre-series (Sam aged 11, Dean 15), hurt Sam.

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supernatural, fanfic

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my_sam_dean June 2 2008, 04:07:45 UTC
Anxiously awaiting your next update. It brings a smile to my face when I see them on my f-list.

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kokoda2007 June 2 2008, 04:48:14 UTC
Awww, thank you!

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facsimilii June 2 2008, 04:24:01 UTC
Sammy's safe for now! Thank you for that!

Dean, please kill that bastard Frank for us...

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kokoda2007 June 2 2008, 04:50:35 UTC
Sammy safe for now? *shudder* Don't give me ideas. I'm still to decide Frank's fate :)

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facsimilii June 2 2008, 04:54:34 UTC
Kekekeke. XD

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damsean June 2 2008, 05:43:39 UTC
Awesome update, Thank God that Sammy is safe..well for now.. :P, ..And Dean was Awesome,the way he got suspicious just because of a moving curtain... Ur story writing technique is awesome, cant wait for more, plz update soon, and did I tell u that I want Frank to die horibly??:)
P.S. Umm I dont want this story to end early, plzz

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kokoda2007 June 2 2008, 06:27:58 UTC
Thank you. I'm trying hard not to just end this story early -as is my habit. But hey, this is already the longest fic I've ever written, so why stop now.

Oh we all want Frank to die horribly, but at the same time, he's so much fun to play with ;)

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coell June 2 2008, 08:42:58 UTC
Ohhhhhh yes. I've been so anxious for this! Great update! (*loves hurt!Sam* heehee)

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Typo coell June 2 2008, 08:43:32 UTC
By the way, you have a teeny typo:

a quite gasp and moan at the gentle movement -- should be "quiet".

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Re: Typo kokoda2007 June 2 2008, 11:27:50 UTC
Thank you - fixed right up. I missed a lot of typos when I first posted this - eyes must have been glazed over from looking at the monitor for too long or something :)

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joyofreading June 2 2008, 10:22:26 UTC
kokoda2007 June 2 2008, 11:30:25 UTC
*smiles* glad you're still following! I'm still playing around with ideas as to what will happen next.

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