Don't Ask Me (How I've Been)

Nov 13, 2013 22:46

Kris/Suho, ~2900

Joonmyun isn't very fond of his past. Or the people in it. ( prompt)

“You can’t be around that man, do you understand me?” )

pairing: kris/suho, fandom: exo

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momothegrace November 20 2013, 16:12:56 UTC
I really love it!
I hope you can do a sequel for this, is like the beginning of something more long. *^*
Sorry for my bad english T__T
Chu <3

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kojafras November 21 2013, 01:38:36 UTC
No, no, your English is great! :D

Sorry, haha I have no idea what to do for this (prequel or sequel wise), I'll probably end up leaving it as-is. Even though it's rushed and short OTL

Thank you so much! <3

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momothegrace November 21 2013, 03:38:28 UTC
I have a suggestion, take it it if you wanna ^^!:
You can continue it, writting about the evolution of the relationship of KrisHo, just after is left it in this drabble, maybe you can writte about the reason of why Kris bullied Joonmyun (everybody knows that was because he love Joonmyun and had no enough brave to say it to him(??)) and Joonmyun admits he had a atraction by Kris when he was in high school (and then maybe smut?(?))

I think this can help you a little bit to writing it *^*

Bad english again, sorry T_T I hope you can understand what I was trying to saying it to you ;_;

I hope you can write more KrisHo in the future, even if isn't a sequel for this one *^*

Chu <3

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kojafras November 21 2013, 08:38:22 UTC
Thank you very much for the idea! I just have so many other things I'd like to write, I might come back to this later… but I don't know. Krisho is amazing, no doubt I'll be writing more of them (probably not related to this, but yeah) in the future. :)

(A+ English, no worries :)

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ext_1365639 November 25 2013, 16:08:13 UTC
OMG I LOVED THIS! IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! LEGIT!

awwwhhhh it's a pity it ended just like that.

but really, it was nice! ^^

i was honestly grinning when i reached the ending. :)

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kojafras November 25 2013, 18:49:59 UTC
Thank you so much!

Yeah, I fudged up the ending a bit. :/

But I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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se_cstatic December 26 2013, 17:20:02 UTC
you got grinning from the very first letter.

awesome job! <3

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kojafras December 26 2013, 17:37:08 UTC
thank you! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

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anonymous December 30 2013, 02:55:03 UTC
omg it was so good!!!
please please please do a sequel :)

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kojafras December 30 2013, 15:50:40 UTC
Thank you very much but I'm sorry I have no idea what I'd do for a sequel :/

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mil_lay October 17 2016, 12:26:06 UTC
Oh my!! How lovely was this! I really liked how protective Joonmyeon was of lil' bro Sehun and how much both of them care about each other. Very sweet :D

I also appreciated how you only alluded to how Joonmyeon and Kris were like in HS, it's nice to be able to draw my own interpretations about it. It contrasted really well with what was going on with Sehun. Good writing that!

The persistent flower giving was sweet too and I really liked the detail about the colours changing - shows that Kris was being thoughtful about his apology in flower form.

Thanks for writing !!

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