I have a suggestion, take it it if you wanna ^^!: You can continue it, writting about the evolution of the relationship of KrisHo, just after is left it in this drabble, maybe you can writte about the reason of why Kris bullied Joonmyun (everybody knows that was because he love Joonmyun and had no enough brave to say it to him(??)) and Joonmyun admits he had a atraction by Kris when he was in high school (and then maybe smut?(?))
I think this can help you a little bit to writing it *^*
Bad english again, sorry T_T I hope you can understand what I was trying to saying it to you ;_;
I hope you can write more KrisHo in the future, even if isn't a sequel for this one *^*
Thank you very much for the idea! I just have so many other things I'd like to write, I might come back to this later… but I don't know. Krisho is amazing, no doubt I'll be writing more of them (probably not related to this, but yeah) in the future. :)
Oh my!! How lovely was this! I really liked how protective Joonmyeon was of lil' bro Sehun and how much both of them care about each other. Very sweet :D
I also appreciated how you only alluded to how Joonmyeon and Kris were like in HS, it's nice to be able to draw my own interpretations about it. It contrasted really well with what was going on with Sehun. Good writing that!
The persistent flower giving was sweet too and I really liked the detail about the colours changing - shows that Kris was being thoughtful about his apology in flower form.
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I hope you can do a sequel for this, is like the beginning of something more long. *^*
Sorry for my bad english T__T
Chu <3
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Sorry, haha I have no idea what to do for this (prequel or sequel wise), I'll probably end up leaving it as-is. Even though it's rushed and short OTL
Thank you so much! <3
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You can continue it, writting about the evolution of the relationship of KrisHo, just after is left it in this drabble, maybe you can writte about the reason of why Kris bullied Joonmyun (everybody knows that was because he love Joonmyun and had no enough brave to say it to him(??)) and Joonmyun admits he had a atraction by Kris when he was in high school (and then maybe smut?(?))
I think this can help you a little bit to writing it *^*
Bad english again, sorry T_T I hope you can understand what I was trying to saying it to you ;_;
I hope you can write more KrisHo in the future, even if isn't a sequel for this one *^*
Chu <3
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(A+ English, no worries :)
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awwwhhhh it's a pity it ended just like that.
but really, it was nice! ^^
i was honestly grinning when i reached the ending. :)
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Yeah, I fudged up the ending a bit. :/
But I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
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awesome job! <3
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please please please do a sequel :)
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I also appreciated how you only alluded to how Joonmyeon and Kris were like in HS, it's nice to be able to draw my own interpretations about it. It contrasted really well with what was going on with Sehun. Good writing that!
The persistent flower giving was sweet too and I really liked the detail about the colours changing - shows that Kris was being thoughtful about his apology in flower form.
Thanks for writing !!
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