Round and round - Uruha x Aoi

Mar 01, 2009 11:10

Title - Round and round.
Author - koihitoyo
Rating - PG, you can read with your abuelita in the room.
Warnings - Unbeta-ed, English is not my main language, so any mistakes are more than human.
Pairings - Uruha x Aoi
Summary - Their life is just a loop in the Universe.
Disclaimers - I own them and you can't tell me that I don't. By the way, my shrink says ( Read more... )

~pg, !open post, ~aoi x uruha

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ultramarinelime March 2 2009, 01:12:42 UTC
I loved this! It was the perfect mixture of angst and fluff ^^ Really good!

And your English was great, by the way :)

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koihitoyo March 8 2009, 22:41:14 UTC
Thank you ;__;!!!

Thanks, It required a lot of time alone with my dictionaries @_@

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kawasakininja March 2 2009, 01:13:21 UTC
Wow, that thing about the infinity was really profound. I'm not sure if I can really picture Uruha saying it (doing him great dishonest maybe) but I like it nevertheless. I liked the mention of the shared past, that little moments that seemed so perfect, and yet they broke up somehow. But it's nice to see them back at the beginning :) I didn't expect this when I decided to read this story. It was pleasant surprise.

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koihitoyo March 8 2009, 22:43:27 UTC
I always picture Uruha like someone who has his instant philosopher moments, other than that he's just a regular guy.

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed ♥.

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xxshamisen March 2 2009, 01:26:09 UTC
Oh. Very insightful. The perfect read after I've hunted myself some smut lol xD

Okay, rambling aside, I just wanted to say that I loved this. Honestly I had a hard time imagining your Uruha since I can't see him as very insightful in a realistic sense, but I suppose he's just actually missing Aoi. A bit jealous, but missing him nevertheless. And I'm glad Aoi accepts him wholeheartedly anyway.

I'm in dire need of really good Aoi/Uruha lately, and you gave me some so thanks very much. ♥ I'd like to read more fics from you~ Aoi/Uruha pretty please? *bricked* xDD

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koihitoyo March 8 2009, 22:47:34 UTC
lol smut + fluff = really good combination 8D!

I also had a hard time, but, you know... That's what happen to him when there is no sex from Aoi is missing in his life, he gives himself time to drown into his melancholy ;_; ♥

Thank you ;-; ♥ I'm already writing another one but... I'm slow as hell ç_ç. and YES Aoi/Uruha indeed *shoots at the flying brick*

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micukofelton March 3 2009, 12:09:05 UTC
I loved this. *_*
Your Uruha is awesome! ^_^ And he really is smart, yey :p
Very nice fic, AoixUruha 4ever :)))

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koihitoyo March 8 2009, 23:03:50 UTC
Thank you *___* !! ♥♥♥♥

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