[FIC] Breathe (Takki x Tsubasa)

[kohee]

Title: Breathe
Author: kohee
Pairing: Takizawa Hideaki x Imai Tsubasa
Summary: They have been spending too much time apart, and it is getting harder to breathe.
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: PG
Author's note: Loosely inspired and based on lyrics from Leona Lewis' Can't Breathe. Cliché lyrics admittedly but I am in love with the song, melody-wise. And

Comments

[gashinenai]

I loved both endings.
As a fan, I appreciate much more the second one.
Cuz I'd really like to see them both together again.
I don't know why they have been split up but, as you wrote, "it doesn't feel right" when they are not together.
I'm happy cuz they have successful solo careers.
But Tackey and Tsubasa should go back at being the "Tackey & Tsubasa" we all miss.
Long comment is long
*gives cookies*

[lovespiral]

*waaails* breakup fic makes me turn into a puddle of weep. i miss the unit so badly too and definitely prefer the rewind version *cough* that said, i like how many of the lines are echoed in both versions and the melancholic feel of the beginning part where there's so much uncertainty.

great idea on their comeback single being written by them! :D

[dorayaki_chan]

awesooooooome >O< it really is , dunno what to say i just simply love it

[avery_averette]

Let's believe that what doesn't kill a relationship only makes it stronger. T&T always and forever! You, keep believing, keep hoping, keep loving!

[ohmiya_sg]

Your angsty version was good, but I miss them together too, so I'm glad you wrote the second one as well.