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kodochalover

Lewd Thoughts [Sequel] Pt 2/2

Jul 11, 2011 17:19

Title: Lewd Thoughts [Sequel] Part 2/2
Author:
Pairing: AriYama
Rating: NC-17
Summary Apparently, busses have a deeper purpose than turning passengers on.

A/N: aahhhh! So I finally finished this!^^ I hope you guys enjoy~ Now I need to get back to writing more one shots xD!!

(Part 1)

( Let's get this show started~ )

yamada ryosuke, arioka daiki, r:nc-17, fan fiction, fanfic: lewd thoughts, chaptered!, g:hey!say!jump, p:daiki/yamada

Comments 30

swimmer_chen July 12 2011, 00:49:18 UTC

SPOT?

swimmer_chen July 12 2011, 00:49:51 UTC

LOL this is CUTE!
is there like a sequel to a sequel?! o.O

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:10:49 UTC

Thanks >////

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:11:51 UTC

damn, my comment got cut off D:<
Thanks for reading and commenting!!^-^
I think I'll probably write another one shot with them xD I want to write other fics too first though^^

alexaleon15 July 12 2011, 00:59:11 UTC

ATSUIIIII!! XD

“I'm not lying. If I was, do you honestly think I'd break down my own door and walk into the shower with pants on??” -hahahaah it's not like our pervert would loose time on taking his pants of XD
I love how yama-chan takes control here <3 <3 <3

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:12:41 UTC

I loveeeeeee when Yamada takes control too o////o
I had so much fun imagining it as I wrote it xD

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!!

alexaleon15 July 19 2011, 05:59:59 UTC

I bet you did lol XD
you're welcome, keep up the good work nee~ ^__^

animejp July 12 2011, 01:04:40 UTC

Kya you I just finish reading the chapter omg this is cute kawaii~

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:13:44 UTC

Thank you for the comment o////o
I love that you think so^^

Thank you for reading and commenting!!
I the feedback♥

tayarisa July 12 2011, 01:31:24 UTC

this is hot.
but I have to accept I laughed when daiki looked himself in the bathroom.
and the way they argue it's really cute. like when Yamada say he wasn't going to talk.

I like it, great fic :D

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:14:57 UTC

Thank you for pointing out specific things you enjoyed :D!!! It helps a lot!! :D
I'm super glad you liked it^^
hehe sometimes its hard for me to come up with their dialogue xD

tayarisa July 19 2011, 10:29:31 UTC

you welcome
ofc I did ^^
LOL for me it's hard to come with an idea, but one I have it the dialogue comes by them-self :DDDD

omgitshsj July 12 2011, 01:38:22 UTC

>///////< that was amaaaazing~

*sigh* Where's the "like" button when I need it??

kodochalover July 19 2011, 05:15:37 UTC

Your comment made me laugh x)
So cute!! I wish LJ had a like button too xD!!
Thank you for the lovely comment^^
and thank you for reading!! :D