Lewd Thoughts Pt 3/3

Jun 17, 2011 21:36



TItle: Lewd Thoughts Pt 3/3
Author: kodochalover
Pairing: AriYama
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Apparently, you can get horny on a bus.

A/N: This is the final part :) Thank you so much for those of you who have continued to follow through this short fic :D I'm truly grateful and Im more grateful about the fact that you commented :D Reading your comments truly ( Read more... )

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zhelchimarquez June 18 2011, 06:44:43 UTC
(ノ><)ノ I WANT MORE.

"You look delicious Arioka-kun"
8D Can I see? XD

"You know what, on second thought, why don’t we stop here?"
DON'T STOP NOW, IT'S GETTING HOT ALREADY.

Yamada leaned in closer and bit Daiki's ear.
I don't know what to say: it's either PIG or CANNIBAL lol XD

"It's me, about to have you begging for more."
*melts*

"Were not strangers anymore. It's so obvious by the way you moaned my name and shamelessly asked for more." ♥

"Hey look, they really did get more pink."
AS EXPECTED OF YAMADA. HE KNOWS ALL THINGS. >>;

I want another smut!Ariyama from you D:

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kodochalover June 19 2011, 04:31:42 UTC
Such a lovely comment *O*!!!! comments like these make writing worth it x3 well, any comment in general makes my heart flutter^^

I would have slapped Daiki for stopping xD!! i wish i could show you all how yummy he looks xD and he's a total cannival xD!!!
I'll totally write more AriYama smut^^ :D

Thank you for reading and commenting :D

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kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:10:25 UTC
If you're interested, I wrote a sequel :)

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gray_fairy June 18 2011, 15:52:05 UTC
Wow, seme!Yamada is awesome :O. The whole thing was sooooo hot....I loved it ^___^

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kodochalover June 19 2011, 04:33:19 UTC
YESHHHHH O___O I also believe that seme Yamada is SUPER HOTTTT XD
Thanks so much for loving it x3 and THANK YOU FOR READING AND COMMENTING^^

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kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:10:55 UTC
I wrote a sequel if you're interested^^

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tayarisa June 19 2011, 09:09:40 UTC
like it.
finaly I read it. I was waiting for this. >///<

yes Daiki, you just lost your virginity to a complete stranger XDDDD
but dont worry since Yamada it's absolutely hot. XDDDDDD

like it ^^

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kodochalover June 20 2011, 09:09:44 UTC
It makes me happy to hear that you anticipated this :D
As long as its Yamada then everything is fine x3!!

Thank you so much for reading, commenting and most of all, liking it♥

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tayarisa June 20 2011, 11:55:06 UTC
ofc I was. LOL
Yes, and he definitely have to visit again. ^^

no need to thank . ^_^

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kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:11:27 UTC
I wrote a sequel to this x) I hope you're interested~

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alexaleon15 June 19 2011, 09:59:50 UTC
Waaa, I read all 3 parts ^^. Yamada sure is a pervert ne~ XD but Daiki isn't that innocent either lol. I love it <3

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kodochalover June 20 2011, 09:12:02 UTC
He's such a hot pervert x3

Thank you so much for loving it and commenting♥

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alexaleon15 June 20 2011, 09:15:46 UTC
yap ♥ no need to thank me ! Keep up the good work ne~ ^^

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kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:11:59 UTC
I sure will :)

Btw, i wrote a sequel to this if you're interested~

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sugarwhales June 19 2011, 14:41:50 UTC
WHOA.
THAT WAS TOO AWESOME FOR WORDS.

Yamada was so .. skilled. HAHA. He could teach Dai-chan a thing or two.. especially since he's such an eager person! /shot/

This was so hot. HAHA. You should write a sequel where they get together but not out of lust, out of love instead. *0*

Thanks for the fun read~

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kodochalover June 20 2011, 09:16:39 UTC
Your comment stands out the most x3!
I LOVE IT!!! :D

THAT WAS TOO AWESOME FOR WORDS.

WOOOHOOOOOO :D I've got you in the speechless zone x3 that makes me happy^^

I'm considering a sequel since it seems like the other commentators think the same xD

yayyy^-^ Thanks so much for reading and commenting :D!!

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kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:12:50 UTC
I dont know if you're interested but I wrote a sequel to this :D

I hope you enjoy^^

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