There is no line that you can't step right over.

[ko_mouse]

This has been on the back burner for a few weeks now.

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[skonen_blades]

Fucking awesome. The questions it raises as it's read, the path it takes the reader on, just magnificent.

I'd maybe give that last line the snip, though.

[ko_mouse]

I was wondering about that last line! It got sort of tacked on the end there, but it felt kind of discordant with the flow of the rest. Gracias for the confirmation.

And mucho gracias for the review. 'Fucking' is a very gratifying adverb; I'm flattered. I was pleasantly surprised by how it turned out.