Hiiiii! I really so sorry it took so long to actually be able to properly sit down at my computer and just ramble on as I always do. Stupid work
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Yunho, Yunho, Yunho. He was such a sweety, and also fiercely loyal to Changmin - and for good reason with this circumstance. Min came out of that Chun affair mentally tortured and Yunho was definitely an important part in the healing process. That being said, I did raise my eyebrows at the two of them sometimes. Min’s mindset regarding Yunho was very interesting but in a slightly frustrating way. He was tortured by Chun’s having used him during sex, but then more or less seeks the same thing from Yunho. ‘My crush just slept with me whilst thinking of someone else and now I feel like I’m not even human…but hey Yun, please sleep with me and you can totally think of someone else like Jae whilst you do it.’ I was like ooouch Min, did Chun really do that much damage for your thinking pattern to assist in degrading yourself? Min wanted to feel LOVED and HUMAN but his message to Yunho was anything but that. So it was very counterproductive in that sense. I felt sorry for Min that he even thought that way. Did he even realise he was doing
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I admit though I was put more at ease at the things Yundo DID say to Min. Because then we could see that Yun did have good intentions. He probably thought diving in was he best thing to do because Min needed fast proof that he wasn’t ugly and was worth everything. I did awwww at Yun, even if my hand was still twitching to smack him for still diving in a bit too fast without thinking of alternate solutions and sizing them up before deciding such a personal, painful act was indeed the best way to go about helping Min. If that makes sense. Because even though Yun really wanted to help Min feel better, I still got the impression that he wasn’t thinking as much about Min as he should have. Again, I stress I know he didn’t do it to aid his sexual frustration, but there was a part when Min was hesitant because he remembered his abuse and yet Yun didn’t notice and continued to dive straight in and take Min’s jeans off etc. Because of things like that, it didn’t exactly completely ease my mind regarding the way Yun was going about things.
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LOL I am always nice~~ But I didn't do anything out of just being nice. ANYWHO WOW Changmin did indeed think a lot through this, huh? xD I really liked the relationships throughout this. HoMin, JaeMin, MinSu, all were perfect~. And yaaaay more YJ fights in kitchens! XD My favorite lines are: "Changmin decided that the entire house would fall to ruins without him while he turned the knob of Yunho's door and cracked it open." <-- Too true! I LOL'ed and "'Remember,' he told the older man before Yunho could react, 'slutty virgin, hyung.'” <-- UGH too funny. You write comedy really well. I was disappointed with the ending but I think I'm only disappointed that it ended, does that make sense?? lol I think you accomplished your goal of characterization though. Good job, bb~~ <33
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I am always nice~~ But I didn't do anything out of just being nice.
ANYWHO
WOW Changmin did indeed think a lot through this, huh? xD
I really liked the relationships throughout this. HoMin, JaeMin, MinSu, all were perfect~.
And yaaaay more YJ fights in kitchens! XD
My favorite lines are:
"Changmin decided that the entire house would fall to ruins without him while he turned the knob of Yunho's door and cracked it open." <-- Too true! I LOL'ed
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"'Remember,' he told the older man before Yunho could react, 'slutty virgin, hyung.'” <-- UGH too funny.
You write comedy really well.
I was disappointed with the ending but I think I'm only disappointed that it ended, does that make sense?? lol
I think you accomplished your goal of characterization though.
Good job, bb~~ <33
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Read the first two parts already and I was itching to comment.
Going to finish this part now and comment later.
KJHFUIHDA SO EXCITED!!!! ♥
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