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lucifertimes January 15 2012, 12:03:24 UTC
I wonder who Choi was. It was a really good read after nearly four hours of having my nose stuffed in Biology books.

Omg,,, what an unhealthy relationship. I wonder how they got together in the first place, hmm. Haha when I read the part where Jaejoong punched Yunho, I thought that there was something off. Then I read your A/N and went all 'oh so that was it' XD

I am still thinking about how Jae and Choi broke up. But I am glad they did. Ah~~ I love Changmin in here, as usual. It was funny how you added little mentions of him here and there despite the situation

Hope to read more from you soon. Love your fics <3

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harunotenshi January 16 2012, 02:06:45 UTC
very long and well written but it leaves me imagining all sorts of things... cruel things --> i can't not imagine nothing but cruel things happening to this 'choi'... that jaejoong has done to choi (i actually keep picturing siwon for this particular character, idk why...) to finally break up with him... LOL.

thank you yunho for making jaejoong SEE that in a relationship it takes TWO people to tango and not just that ONE who lords all over you like you're some animal... a pet --> which he's not. but yeah... some people are really into these kind of stuff... i don't really blame them if it makes them happy and content... but only if the feeling is shared by BOTH.

anyway, great yunjae minus the smut but still great~ it almost had me crying cause of the bathroom scene... :)

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paprika January 16 2012, 17:44:15 UTC
parks myself here, spot!

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paprika January 16 2012, 18:36:49 UTC
ah i was a little bit disappointed with jaejoong's lack of self worth but i guess it added to yunho's protectiveness/possessiveness so it's all good. the first part kinda made me dizzy...it was the images, god, just the bile and piss and come in jaejoong's mouth made me wanna throw up but i finished the story without making a run for the bathroom \o/ i like how much of a gentleman yunho is, in here, he's definitely willing to let jaejoong have his way! ah sweet yunho ;;

thanks for the great read, this is such a unique mixture of horror (i swear its the images) and fluff and romance and i enjoyed it a lot! it's very different from my favorite fic of yours but i like both just the same ;D

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vizinga January 16 2012, 18:48:44 UTC
OMG! It was very hard to read the first part. I couldn't understand JJ. But in RL there is a lot of people like he is in this fic. It's so sad. I'm glad that in the second part he came to his senses.

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ultamatempa January 16 2012, 19:08:22 UTC
i think i would have been ok with the s-m relationship if it looked like choi respected jae at all. jae could defend all he wanted, but the fact that he tried to get none participating people to join in was just disrespectful. s-m relationships are built on a lot of trust and respect, to have someone just abuse you is not what a s-m relationship is supposed to be about. also, partners shouldn't be afraid to voice out their dislikes. being beaten to the point of having a broken rib is not rough play, that's freaking domestic abuse. no one can say they get off on an injury that makes it hurt to breathe.

i'm glad that jae's finally made the decision to leave choi. yunho might not be into all the kinks that jae's into, but at least he respects jae enough to let him make his own decisions. i'm glad they are together, jae probably can use the vanilla sex for awhile to heal from all the injuries choi inflected.

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