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knowmonsta

[One-Shot] Stages

Apr 15, 2012 10:28

Stages
Onew/Key / PG-13 / 4,303 words / AU
Summary: It's been ten months since CEO Kim Kibum has been in the dating world. Can he pull himself together, or will his past continue to interfere with his present?

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group: shinee, genre: au, rating: pg-13, pairing: onew/key

Comments 19

prickme April 15 2012, 16:45:34 UTC

this is cute ;_____; i can't believe the amt of work that you authors put into your work (three drafts since 2010!), i have so much respect for them since they don't benefit from writing and sharing their work. this was a good read thank you for sharing and writing (:

knowmonsta April 18 2012, 00:09:04 UTC

We do benefit! Comments like yours make my day! :D

And I'm so glad that you liked it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

fonulyn April 15 2012, 16:50:37 UTC

This now was so incredibly sweet! I was tearing up at the breakup in the beginning and it made me so sad but in the end I was smiling like an idiot again. Jonghyun is awesome as a friend that kicks Kibum's butt when needed, and Jinki is so utterly charming ;-; And a happy ending! ♥ Loved it!

knowmonsta April 18 2012, 00:09:16 UTC

I'm so glad that you loved it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

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knowmonsta April 18 2012, 00:10:46 UTC

I honestly didn't know how to put the sangtae into Onew's character without making it too cheesy. XD

But I'm so glad that you liked it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

yaoiokami April 15 2012, 17:56:14 UTC

Since 2010? WOW
Well, let me tell you it definitely shows. The writing is practically flawless.
It's really amazing and I really, really like your Kibum. haha
The end was really adorable! I shall forever ship the Diva and Leader. :D

Thanks for sharing this hard work of yours. It was very well appreciated!

knowmonsta April 18 2012, 00:11:43 UTC

OnKey shippers ftw! ♥

I'm so glad that you liked it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

max2min April 15 2012, 19:42:43 UTC

"Tell your friend not to expect much."
How I love the way Kibum said it confidently ended up, well.

His past must be hurt but fortunately he has a great bestfriend --thanks for him, and met Jinki. I mean who's not interested with the Charming Jinki? Didn't give a pressure to Kibum and everything but stay, how loyal.

Beautiful written ♥

knowmonsta April 18 2012, 00:13:54 UTC

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D