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[One-Shot] Starlight

Apr 12, 2008 11:07

Title: Starlight

Author: Knowmonsta

Pairing: TegoPi

Words: 767

Genre: Romance

Rating: PG

Summary: Pi's always at the heart of Tegoshi's prayers.

( Yamapi smiled and stood quietly at the edge of the door to the bedroom: he was praying. )

pairing: yamashita tomohisa/tegoshi yuya, character: tegoshi yuya, group: news, character: yamashita tomohisa, genre: romance, length: one-shot, rating: pg

Comments 17

mujun April 12 2008, 18:23:24 UTC

That was adorable! I'm jealous of your prayer, though. My mom taught me "Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the Lord my soul to keep. If I should die before I wake, I pray the Lord my soul to take." o_O How do you teach that to a little kid! Seriously! I was much too young to contemplate dying in my sleep!

Anyway, I'm hoping that you write a sequel to this because I'm really intrigued!

knowmonsta April 13 2008, 03:11:58 UTC

LMAO. I heard that version too and it freaked me OUT. So I say the happy version. ^_^.

Sequel? Hmm . . . *starts drafting* Lol.

tashycute April 12 2008, 18:41:14 UTC

I just had my teeth cleaned, you know. And because of this, they started rotting all over again.

I love the prayer and the wish thing. :) Adorable. Although I doubt that this innocent part of Tegoshi is still alive.

Anyway, is it okay for me to point out a few mistakes? D:

knowmonsta April 13 2008, 03:10:49 UTC

I doubt Tegoshi's still innocent either. Lol.

And if you see a mistake let me know so I can correct it!

tashycute April 13 2008, 03:52:30 UTC

Haai~

I can beta for you, if you'd like. :D

knowmonsta April 13 2008, 21:20:21 UTC

Coolie! Whenever I need you I'll sent my stuff to you, is that okay?

Thread 5

cess_chan April 13 2008, 08:48:22 UTC

I love your work. <333. And his prayer... *faints* lol. Hurray for tegopi <333

knowmonsta April 13 2008, 21:21:26 UTC

Thank you!

laftkeichan April 13 2008, 22:36:07 UTC

cute! cute!
is it just a one shot fic??
please, i want to see tego's confession!
please???
pi is just too adorable, i love him!

knowmonsta April 14 2008, 21:04:00 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

I'm thinking about doing part II with Tesshi's confession. It may take awhile though.

vessaharja April 14 2008, 11:43:53 UTC

WAHH !! 88DDDDDdd awwnn huhuhuhuhuh. This fic was so awwnn cute 88DDD whyahahah. Made me all fluffy and things - and believe me, I don't get fluffy so easily so.. 8DDD Whahah.
Tegopi really is OTP ne~ whahha.

Will you continue this fic? 88DDD Aww well, if you don't, it's OK - I love the ending still 8DD Whahahah Yamapi is .. .. .. evil. 8DD wjahahhaha. ohohohoho.

Yeah.. 8DDDD This made my day. Thank you.

knowmonsta April 14 2008, 20:48:47 UTC

lol. You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it!