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[One-Shot] Invisible

Jun 06, 2008 15:56

Title: Invisible

Author: Knowmonsta

Pairing(s): YabuJin (One-Sided) (Yay! More un-promoted pairings!)

Words: 456

Genre: Romance

Rating: PG

Summary: The first in a series of one-shots about the pairing. Yabu's schoolboy crush on Jin is accidentally revealed.

( Jin smiled and hugged him again. Yabu felt butterflies at his touch. )

group: kat-tun, character: yabu kota, genre: romance, character: yaotome hikaru, rating: pg, group: ya-ya-yah, length: one-shot, character: akanishi jin, pairing: akanishi jin/yabu kota

Comments 37

chibilover14 June 6 2008, 20:26:22 UTC

*flails again* Waaah! YabuJin! XDDDD I always thought they were cute together! I love the kawaii moments together! >w<

"And besides, he's much older than me," Yabu replied, sighing. "He'd never like me that way."
Hikaru saw the sadness in his best friend's eyes and hugged him.
"I might as well be invisible," Yabu said, miserably.

But it's so sad.. T__T *sniffles* I feel so sad for Yabu now.. don't worry! Hikaru ish there to comfort you! YabuHika! XDDD
And when Jin kept on saying Yabucchi, I kept on thinking about the YabuChii fanfics you wrote. XDDD

Really nice one-shot! I look forward to more.. I can't write fanfics!! *dies*

knowmonsta June 6 2008, 20:54:52 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I was really nervous about posting a YabuJin due to their age difference.

And lol. I thought about that too when I wrote 'Yabuchii'. ^_^.

I'm glad you liked it!

And with the research and practice, everyone can write fanfics!!!!

chibilover14 June 6 2008, 21:09:32 UTC

>w< Oh really? I think age difference doesn't really matter when it comes to JE. It's not that big of a difference you know.. Plus I had this strange thing about Yuto and Kame. O__O;;

Hehe.. It's a cute nickname for Yabu.. when he was smaller! XDDD

Of course! I'm a fan of your fanfics now! XDDD Well any one of them that's HSJ related so far.. XDD

Research??? >.>;; I dunno how to start my fanfic. I mean.. I already got ideas..

knowmonsta June 6 2008, 21:34:01 UTC

I mean research as far as grammar and things. ^_^.

sakuramushy27 June 6 2008, 21:31:30 UTC

whoah. YabuJin. xD it's cute ne~ and hika-chan is so kawaii here too~~ ^^

knowmonsta June 6 2008, 21:35:04 UTC

Lol. I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for reading! ^_^.

jeniski June 7 2008, 03:22:37 UTC

this was really cute with them in it!

knowmonsta June 7 2008, 05:50:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you think so!

Thank you for reading!

aiko103 June 7 2008, 04:54:56 UTC

hikka!!! i want you to comfort me too T-T lol ..kidding, kidding ..
Yabucchi.. if i cancel the other 'c' and put an 'i' at the back it'll become YabuChii hahaha .. jin and yabu .. Lol, I remember how close those two were, and Jin really love Yabu like a younger brother, also I heard that Jin actually asked Yabu's mother if he could take care of Uabu as his younger brother .. Jin's so sweet!! he must love Yabu~

("I might as well be invisible," Yabu said, miserably.) It's so sad when i read this.. I can feel the sadness(somehow).. but still I want Hikau to comfort me too T-T Lol ..
I love your Fanfics ^-^ It's so nice^-^

knowmonsta June 7 2008, 05:51:05 UTC

^_^. I'm glad you liked it!

And Yabu and Jin were pretty close. I kinda miss that.

aiko103 June 7 2008, 05:57:33 UTC

I miss that too .. but looks like Yabu's taller than Jin now T-T but they're still cute >_

_____just_me June 7 2008, 05:14:11 UTC

mah, not exactly my OTP....but CUTE!!! :D can't wait to read more~

P.S. SUPER SMASH BROS.!! ♥

knowmonsta June 7 2008, 05:51:28 UTC

Lol. Super Smash ROCKS!

Thank you for reading!