FFVII Fic: Silver Lining (3. Forward)

[knowing_shadows]

More, yay! Trying to post this to LJ as well, but seems like it's down again, so dunno if this worked...

Title: Silver Lining (3. Forward)
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Rating: R
Word count: ~4300
Pairing: Eventual Sephiroth/Zack/Cloud
Warnings: Nibelheim AU. Occasional bad language in this chapter. Unbeta'd. WIP.
Disclaimer: I do not own Final Fantasy VII,

Comments

[dobranocka]

I absolutely love the way you write. You really have a knack for descriptions and building up the tension. Every chapter ends just right.
And I adore the little things that show affection and attraction between them. Very well done, makes me go all "aaawww". ^^

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you very much! :D

[silvr_dagger]

Just found this, read the whole thing, and love it. Your Sephiroth is fascinating, and the interactions between all three of them are perfect. I also think that you did a very good job getting across the horror of Hojo's lab without overdoing it. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you for the lovely comment :)

[bellicosus]

Zack's unease and the tension is palpable. My shoulders were locked up the entire time I was reading this.

Thank you for the perfect late night treat. ♥

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you for the lovely comment :)

[suixcausa]

Poor little chocobo. *wibble*

I really enjoy your characterization and look forward to more. :3

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you very much! :)

[history13041985]

I like it. It is a little sad (and horrible) how Hojo can do what he wants with people and nobody said something. I like too that Sephiroth is between sans and mad.
I think that the turk wil not survive if they try to battle against Sephiroth.