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[knkfics]

Well, I finally finished this part up! I only had to work on it for three months...

Comments

[yaoikitten]

I've been waiting 3 months for this. I loved:

-Bren taking forever to pick out an outfit, just like a girl.
-Monica's snide remarks that are so funny when you know who Bren is really in love with.
-The fact that Bren's short story was called "Fallen into Grace"
-Lucian being so gentle with Bren and not pushing him into anything. It's nice to see guys who aren't jerks. Well, at least yet anyways.
-The lime.

I'm so glad this isn't dead, and I can't wait to read more. I'm always looking forward to your posts.

[bombay_koneko]

Meh. Monica seemed DECENT this time around.... I agree with yaoikitten, really kinda ironic that she's putting effort to help Bren when he's going to go see her boyfriend.

[tomoyodaidouji]

Ex-boyfriend by now, tho, right?

[knkfics]

Indeed, ex-boyfriend by now. ^^

[fantasicat]

Monica was actually semi-nice in this. It was kinda sweet to see what have to be very deeply buried older-sister instincts rising to the surface. Lucian/Bren is too cute for words. Three month wait was definitworth it; I loved it. ^_^

~FantasiCat~

[slytherinblack]

Yaaaay! [loves on it]

[tomoyodaidouji]

"You look pretty," Anna said. **snerk** Aw, younger Anna's cute~ How old is she here?

...short story 'Fallen Into Grace'... [5 second pause] ...BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Short story??? **wipes away copious tears of laughter** That was wonderful--made my day...

*_____* ...so. Much. Fanservice... **goes into overload**

Eheh... well worth the wait! ^____~

[knkfics]

Yeah, the day Fallen Into Grace will be a short story... is the day that Ka-chan and I manage to write anything under 300 pages. Just a little amusement for myself and the audience. ^_~

Anna is four years younger than Bren, so that makes her 13 or so in this. Maybe 12, depending on when their birthdays are.