fiction: Holding On, Ten Years Gone

[knittedshadow]

Title: Holding On, Ten Years Gone
Fandom: Queer as Folk
Pairing/Characters: Brian/Justin
Author: knittedshadow
Rating: adult
Words: 4,996
Description: It had been ten years since the Munchers moved to Canada and last Fall Brian had finally gotten tired of sleeping on pull-out couches and in shitty motel rooms
Warning: Post-513, spoilers for Season 5.

Comments

[flashfly]

I liked your vision of a weary Justin ready to come home. This was a great description of their first kiss:

Then he’s leaning forward, metal bar pressing into his stomach as he kisses Brian, lips and teeth clashing clumsily as they grin against each other’s mouths. He pulls away, cheeks a little flushed.

And this made me grin:

“So how is Debbie?” he asks.

Brian surveys his rooms sourly. “Disgustingly festive,” he says. “And currently dead to me.”

and I loved the way you painted Brian here:

“I’m trying to tell you that I miss you!” Brian bursts out, sudden and too loud and Justin’s head jerks up in surprise. He swallows in the following silence and his eyes flicker to avoid Justin’s.

“And that I want you to come home,” he finishes quietly.

[knittedshadow]

Glad I made you grin :) Thanks hun.

[am3lee]

I really like it. =)

[knittedshadow]

I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[cindybaby]

Two words...

LOVED IT!

I really did!

*smile*

[knittedshadow]

Heh. Yay! Glad you loved it :)

Oooo...

[essency]

Lovely! Is it ok if I ask for more? Hahaha...

Re: Oooo...

[knittedshadow]

Yay, glad you liked it :).

[yetunknown]

oh my. this fic made me smile all the way through. *sigh*

I really loved this, especially how you portrayed Gus. may I friend you?

[knittedshadow]

Thanks sweetie, I'm glad you liked it. Of course you can friend me :)