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Primeval fic: I'm Fine

Aug 21, 2009 01:20

Title: I'm Fine

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 548

Characters: James Lester, Jenny Lewis.

Rating: 15

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

Warning: Angst, hurt/comfort

A/N: Part of 10 the Claiming series, sequel to Bad Day At The Office and continues in Beautiful And Dangerous. Thanks ( Read more... )

claiming series, jenny lewis, james lester, angst, hurt/comfort, fic

Comments 14

rusty_armour August 21 2009, 01:28:51 UTC

Oh, no! Poor Lester! Poor Jenny! :-( Well, I'm glad Jenny knows that Lester needs help, even if Lester ended up pushing her away. BTW I think you've done a great job of conveying what Lester's emotional state would be after everything he went through. I found it moving that Jenny cried herself when she reached her own office.

knitekat August 21 2009, 21:10:39 UTC

Thanks for the comment, good to know you think the fic works.

auntypam August 21 2009, 03:15:00 UTC

Poor Lester*huggleshim* Glad Jenny could be there for him. And yes your insight into the trama of Lesters ordeal is brilliant:) can't wait for more

knitekat August 21 2009, 21:12:07 UTC

Lester needs hugs at the moment. Hope I can handle how he copes OK.. meep, thinking about it.

telperion_15 August 21 2009, 07:17:51 UTC

*wibbles*

I love (is love the right word? Hmmmmmm...) how Jenny so nearly gets through, but then Lester puts his walls back up right at the last moment. Very well handled.

Here's hoping someone can help him...

knitekat August 21 2009, 21:14:04 UTC

Pets telperion_15, I'm sure everything will be OK.
Jenny did try, but Lester isn't ready to talk just yet.
I've got a few ideas, but the bunnies keep doing u-turns and are presently sulking.

talliw August 21 2009, 07:35:53 UTC

Heartbreaking, intense and really painful to read how Lester tries to cope with the event and fails.
He isn't ready yet to accept help and Jenny doesn't know what to do to help him.
*huggles them both*

knitekat August 21 2009, 21:16:10 UTC

Unfortunately James isn't ready to accept he needs help just yet, but I don't think Jenny's going to give up on him, depending what the bunnies decide to do, of course.
Joins you in hugging them.

nietie August 21 2009, 07:56:54 UTC

Poor Lester, but in a way I'm happy he is able to react at all.
Good for Jenny for trying to talk to him.
*hugs them both*

knitekat August 21 2009, 21:19:25 UTC

Thanks, I had to have Lester reacting so he has a chance to heal. They both need hugs.