When The Scales Fall - Part 1 - Secret Santa 2018 for Eriah211

[knitekat]

Title: When The Scales Fall - Part 1

Comments

[eriah211]

Oops! Stephen was caught red-handed, but it could have been much worse, me thinks *g*

It was good to see Stephen using his brain and realizing something wasn't right about Helen *rolls eyes* And the look at Lester's personal space was great, really enjoyed it, especially Stephen's reactions to some of the things he found.

A wonderful Christmas present, thank you! I'm dying to read the rest of it ^_^

[knitekat]

Definitely oops, but as you said, it could be worse.

Stephen had to use his head in some 'verse. Glad you liked the look at Lester's personal space and, well, Stephen had to react to some of the things he found ;)

*bows* Glad you enjoyed the fic... er... tomorrow ;) Thanks for reading.

[isamazed]

It really feels like being with him all the time. I can’t wait to find out what’s in the book.
You made me laugh at the bit about the jeans - my dad didn’t have any before getting together with my mum! We never get tired of teasing him about it 😜

[knitekat]

Good to know it felt like you were with him. Hee, hope it is worth waiting for.

Hee, Lester had to have jeans and Stephen had to be shocked.

Thanks for reading.

[nietie]

Great idea of using Stephen’s suspicions of Lester in a fic and great use of the prompts.

I can feel something brewing here between them. Love that.

[knitekat]

Glad you liked me using Stephen's suspicions, it was too good an opening not to use. *bows*

Hee... maybe, carry on reading. Thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

Great start!. I love this looks at how Stephen's preconceptions start to get overturned. And I always like a look at Lester in a domestic context.

[knitekat]

Thanks. Stephen is supposed to be perceptive, so he should have noticed the inconsistancies. Glad you liked the look at Lester's domestic situation. Thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

Silly Stephen! This is fun!

[knitekat]

Why silly? For trusting Helen or being caught by Lester?

Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

For breaking into Lester's house and poking around! Very naughty.
:D

[knitekat]

True ;) But I'm sure Stephen doesn't quite see it that way.