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lukadreaming December 26 2016, 20:44:28 UTC
Splendid mix of action and relationship. Ooh err for the robe and boots!

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knitekat December 27 2016, 16:03:55 UTC
*bows* Good to know it worked and that you liked it. I believe Danny is really looking forward to the robe and boots.

Thanks for reading.

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fredbassett December 26 2016, 21:20:13 UTC
That was a fab bit of action there! And I like Lester's friends.

Great story!

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knitekat December 27 2016, 16:09:16 UTC
Glad the action worked and Em and Charlie were fun to write.

*blushes* and thanks for reading.

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goldarrow December 26 2016, 21:43:07 UTC
Em and Charlie need to make a reappearance one day. They're delightful!

Great action sequences.

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knitekat December 27 2016, 16:15:08 UTC
Glad you liked Em and Charlie, they were fun to write.

Good to know the action worked, I wasn't 100% sure about them.

Thanks for reading.

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eriah211 December 26 2016, 22:01:35 UTC
When he noticed one enterprising fool try to grab one of the shards, Danny muttered, “Oh for fuck's sake!”
I confess I probably would try to do that too *g*

Secret passages! Danny with a medieval mace and shield! \0/ Smart raptors attacking! Everything was so great! ^_^

And Em and Charlie were awesome. Beware Charlie (and Lester) with a frying pan! They are good friends and great hosts *g*

It was great to see Lester and Danny being cute and caring and also a lot of action. Loved it to pieces! Thank you for writing it ^_^

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knitekat December 27 2016, 16:19:40 UTC
Yeah (just not sensible if you know dinosaurs might bite you while you're doing it) ;)

There had to be secret passages and I couldn't resist giving Danny a mace and shield once he was in armour. *nods* The raptors had to be a) smart and b) not too much for the boys to deal with.

Hee, never annoy Charlie when she's armed (or even unarmed). Good to know you liked her and Em.

*breaths in relief* Yay for you liking the boys being cute and caring (although James will deny it).

*hugs* and very happy you liked it.

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ebonyfeather December 29 2016, 21:55:56 UTC
Wonderful! I do love Em and Charlie, and the thought of Lester in just the robe and boots... Lovely.

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knitekat December 29 2016, 23:24:08 UTC
*bows* Glad you liked it. Em and Charlie took over ;) Hee, I think Danny loved that thought too.

Thanks for reading.

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